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Tuesday, February 28, 2012

Spring: A Haiku...!!!


New Generation,
Biding Goodbye to Shivers,
Greets the pleasant Spring...!!!


Written for: HAIKU HEIGHTS.

PS: My first attempt at Haiku...Critic Reviews are invited... :O

43 comments:

  1. Nice picture to go with a nicely written Haiku

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  2. Haiku is not easy...glad to see you first one so apt. Looking forward to more..
    cheers.

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  3. Regards the haiku, nothing much to say :) It's a beautiful one. A pleasant spring's tale.

    its "bidding goodbye" rather than "biding good-bye" I feel.

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    1. Thanks Leo...
      correction made... :)

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    2. Sarab, this isn't an "attempt" my friend. This is a proper haiku itself. :)

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  4. Such a cute Haiku. Beautifully written. :)

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  5. good one . . keep writing :)
    cheers
    maliny

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  6. ahh.. a haiku for spring.. lovely!

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  8. so looking forward to spring here ..
    and thats a good haiku

    Bikram's

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  9. Beautiful Haiku ! Welcoming the spring.....
    And, that picture is also cute :) :)

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  10. Hi CYNOSURE,

    Here's a lovely attempt by you :)
    So refreshing your words..

    Keep Expressing & Sharing ~

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  11. Beautiful Picture and a Beautiful Haiku :).
    A fantastic attempt Cynosure jhi :).
    Too good.
    I loved it :) :D.

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    1. thanku a lot Princess...
      actually after seeing your post only I planned to make an attempt for Haiku... :P
      Thanks for inspiring me... :)

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    2. Oh wow. I inspired someone :O.
      *heart attack* :D
      So good to know jhi :).

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    3. hahaha..."heart attacks"... :P
      inspiration can come at any time...nobody knows... :P

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  12. Haiku is not so easy and you've come up with it so well and aesthetically with an equally gorgeous photo!! :) Good attempt Cynosure!! :)

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  13. Cute n lovely picture decorated by beautiful words...nice haiku! :)

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  14. Still waiting for shivers to end here in the Desert Southwest, USA!



    Waiting for Springtime

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    1. hmmm...hope your waiting period ends soon... :) :)

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