Life's Like That...!!!

HE will keep testing you from time to time and you will see lots of UP's and DOWN's......try to never give up, you will definitely succeed in HIS test.....

Isn't time Running Out

Monday, April 2, 2012

Deserted: A Haiku...!!!




bereft of loved ones,
deserted we are left; as
hard time approaches;


Written for: Haiku-Heights(part of The April Heights Month)

PS: Just a perception from a big collection of how one interprets situations in life... :)

43 comments:

  1. What hard times.. dear.. God has never deserted anyone.. hard times only mean some hard lessons from God...through some hard methods.. As a haiky well done.. RS:)

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    1. I completely agree with you RS and also I'm not denying your statement...but times comes when we're the only one left suffering...
      anyways...just another debatable topic... ;)
      Thanks... :)

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  2. sometimes, with some people, it does happen..

    again, well put...

    mine's here : http://blackandwhiteheart.wordpress.com/2012/04/02/mine-self-exile-haiku-3/

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  3. Hard times come and go...it makes us feel deserted but hopefully we can overcome ~

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    1. hard times always come up with new lessons... :)

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  4. You always give us thoughtful haiku. I like the line "bereft of loved ones" because sometimes despite ourselves we feel this way.
    Thank you.

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    1. you are right Ellecee...thanks... :)

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  5. There is an enigmatic beauty in tragedy! Sometimes, physical pain is just when the spirit flowers with exquisite beauty!

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    1. a very deep thought GW...beautifully put up...thanks... :)

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  6. everything is grace...even hard times...

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  7. loving yourself is an art and learning this art will never let anyone feel deserted ...as a haiku
    good thought :)

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    1. @surbhi...as I've mentioned earlier, at some stage you'll need some for sure...no matter how much you love someone... :)

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    1. hahaha...That was indeed a nice one MMT...thanks...loved it... :)

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  9. Ride the waves of loss ~ part of life ~ well written haiku ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  10. such is life my friend , people usually desert us when the time if tough...

    tough times teach us a lot ..

    Bikram's

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    1. rightly said Bikram...very true... :)

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  11. How true! Described the fact of life :)
    Thanks for sharing :)

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    1. Thanks Valli...You are welcome... :D

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  12. Bitter truth of life!
    Once again, nicely penned as always!:)

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  13. Lovely. Yes, Hard times do that to us, but only then we realize who were true to us!

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    1. u r right Ashwini...that's the perfect time to know who are true to us...thanks... :)

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  14. I agree absolutely, beautifully expressed Cyno.

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  15. Hard times are part and parcel of life.. Cynosure image and words..

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  16. Grief, although part of life, is often a hard hurdle to overcome!

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  17. Lucky are those who finds people to support at the hardest of times in life.
    Though it rings a sad note, its a beautiful hakiu. loved it.

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  18. hard times are depressing but we gotta move on...TIME HEALS EVERYTHING!!!!!!
    Great Work...Keep it up

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