Life's Like That...!!!

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Isn't time Running Out

Sunday, April 1, 2012

Eager: A Haiku...!!!



eagerness to end
with neglected efforts; leaves
us with only despair

Written for: Haiku-Heights(part of The April Heights Month)

PS: If we don't give required efforts to the task to which we're desperate to complete; at the end despair is the only thing we're left with...


55 comments:

  1. Truly this does have a desperate feel to it.

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  2. I hear your despair ~

    Nice one ~

    http://everydayamazin.blogspot.ca/2012/03/eager.html

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  3. Thought provoking haiku. Well done.

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  4. Thought provoking haiku. Well done.

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  5. True enough ~ well written ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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    1. Thanks a lot Carol...and namaste ji... :)

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  6. That's so correct ! Well written.

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  7. A true statement that...and I am happy to find an eager and curious soul here...good one..

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    1. I'm very curious RS... ;)
      thanks a lot... :)

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  8. This is so true. A haiku with a spiritual touch. Thank you.

    Namaste

    My contribution to the Haiku Heights April Challenge:

    http://chevrefeuilleshaikublog.blogspot.com/2012/04/blog-post.html

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  9. In little words,
    you teach me moral
    for the entire life!
    Nice one man!:)

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    1. Thanks Kinara...You're most welcome... :)

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  10. Truer words were not spoken... you are acing the Haiku :)

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  11. true and nicely put.. nice haiku, Sarab.

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  12. Very well said. The PS also sounds like a poem.

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    1. thats a sweet complement...thanks a lot HV... :)

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  13. my attempt : http://blackandwhiteheart.wordpress.com/2012/04/01/careful-with-your-eagerness-haiku/

    my recommends from the submitted haiku :

    1) Kinara : http://kshahzworld.blogspot.in/2012/04/eager.html

    2) Teresa :
    http://kshahzworld.blogspot.in/2012/04/eager.html

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    1. Thanks Jayanth...I might have missed them... :)

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  14. So true!
    Beautifully written! :)

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  15. Nice one. Wonderfully written.

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  16. Your haiku speaks reality!...Beautifully penned

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  17. So thoughtful, Sarabjeet, and beautifully penned!

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  18. Absolutely, Sarab! Very on the money, this one!

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  19. It is often those silly decisions which we make in less than a split second, that leaves a huge impact on us, forever!

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    1. Very true...rightly said Ashwini... :)

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  20. you are really a master in choosing the right picture for your beautiful touching words.. how great it is to read your sweet comment when I was in your blog.. by the way when are you planning to sleep?

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    1. Thanku So much Saravana... :)

      the vice-versa I've experienced with you too... :P

      ooo...when I'm planning to sleep...I'm a nocturnal creature...so u cant guess when I'll be sleeping... ;) :P

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  21. You are getting better and better with this style of writing. Loved this one too. :)

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  22. And that is why i am never eager to do any work...Laziness rocks ;)
    haha
    btw this is such a thought provoking line...I should try to apply it

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    1. You're also an engineer Harshita...and we're supposed to be lazy...and we always rock... :D :D :D
      lolzzz... :P

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