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Saturday, April 7, 2012

Forgive: A Haiku...!!!





doors of love
opens heart wide; grace
of virtue

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don't hate them,
just forgive them, they'll
die themselves


Written for: Haiku-Heights(part of The April Heights Month)

PS: Try to forgive once...all doors of love will be opened through your heart...No bonds, no relationship will be broken... :)

61 comments:

  1. wonderful Sarab.. loved it..so true..

    "they'll die themselves" : stroooongg !!
    "grace of love" : beautifully written..

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  2. Loved both haiku....Beautifully written

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  3. I like the line.. They will die themselves.. indeed I have seen it..

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  4. Loved your first one and agree totally.. although the second one makes sense.. I really find it very difficult to forget. I forgive easily but forgetting is something I have to learn to do fast too..:(

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    1. Kajal, you make such a good point. Sometimes we forgive but don't forget. I guess when bygones truly becomes bygones can we achieve that state of total forgiveness.

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    2. I just asked for forgiveness because I myself is very bad at forgetting...u know na...i have a very sharp memory... :P
      thanks... :)

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    3. By the way i still have one doubt...can total forgiveness can be achieved without forgetting...??? :O

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    4. a typical human behaviour... :)

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  5. I enjoyed your set of haiku very much. I like the words "grace of virtue" Without forgiveness it is very difficult to move on.

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    1. rightly said Ellecee...thanks... :)

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  6. Second Haiku.... very intense that!!!!! Loved both... :)

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  7. excellent haiku ~ tribute to life and death ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  8. Nice set...specially the second one, I never thought of forgiveness this way ~

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    1. I'm really glad you liked it... :)

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  9. The first haiku is like some thoughts setting the stage for the powerful drama in the second!

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    1. That something I too didn't noticed...thanks Gemma... :)

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  10. Wow, so powerful! Love it! Anyway forgiveness is the sweetest revenge ;)

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    1. yeaaahhh it is indeed...thanks... :)

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  11. they die themselves...is cruel phrase...human forgiveness moves beyond . its about reaching out .and reaching in ...

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    1. hmmm...it went a bit cruel...but somtimes cruel phrase are easy to get... :)
      thanks debu... :)

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  12. Yes, if you forgive, these bad feelings would disappear. 'They' here I would take to mean the 'bad feelings' not people. Great thinking!

    Hank

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    1. thats really a sweet thought "bad feelings" instead of "people"...thanks... :)

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  13. Every day when I read your haiku ... I am in awe. Wonderfully composed this set. Very spiritual.

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  14. terse verses are so hard to write!!! Neat Haikus, Cynosure!

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  15. Truth of life..forgive and they will die, and you will get a life with complete freedom.

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  16. I loved the last line...keep it up...
    Bless ya

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    1. thanku so much Harshita... :)
      GOD bless u too dear... :)

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  17. I loved the second one..too good

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  18. I second Kajal...gud pc of wrk !

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  19. "don't hate them,
    just forgive them, they'll
    die themselves"- True :)

    Regards
    village girl

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  20. i used to think this was a defeatist attitude, but it works

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    1. It surely works...but obviously never let anyone hurt you dear...never be a coward...but be polite... :)

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  21. Hello. You have a very nice blog :)
    This one is very simple yet so strong. Loved it!

    P.s - Why is this 'Haiku' in all your posts?

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    1. thats so sweet of you vivaciousfreak...thanks for dropping by... :)

      PS: you asked for why I’m having “Haiku” in all my posts…actually April is celebrated as month of poets where everyone writes atleast one poem everyday…and “Haiku” is a form of Japanese poetry, which is non-rhyming and written in 3 lines under some specific conditions…and I’m just trying that only…so you gonna find this word everyday till 30th april on my every post… :P ;)

      take care… :)

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  22. They will die themselves. I love your Haiku Set..

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