HE will keep testing you from time to time and you will see lots of UP's and DOWN's......try to never give up, you will definitely succeed in HIS test.....
the second one goes deep beyond the 11 syllables.!! superbly written Sarabjeet! :)
thank you so much man...thanks a lot... :)
Lovely... both! Very very nice!Loved the first one very much... Create it!!! So true.. :)
Thanks...was expecting similar reply from an engineering student... ;)
very intense and practical ... good 1 :)
thanks dear... :)
Good ones Sarabjeet..trust me.. even forgiving is on the surface.. really you are never fully able to fogive the mistakes of heart..and that's why you never forget... you inspired me to think.. Thankyou.. dear..
thats really an honor for me...thanks a lot RS...you are welcome... :)
Why not "create it" indeed. And the second one we work with always. Very nice.
you're right Ellecee...thanks... :)
why???? Because we are humans..
that might be one of the reasons... :Othanks SIS... :)
I believe in creating so its always possible ~Intriguing haiku ~
thanks Grace... :)
I really like that second one!
thanks Mama... :)
Again a set of nice haiku with a deeper meaning. Especially the second one surprised me. Thank you for sharing.
Thanks a lot man... :)
I really like both! Really meaningful.. Why can't forget? I always forgot what makes me upset.. :) I'll start argument with hubby and when he asked why am I angry, I can't remember why but I know I'm upset with him.. so no other choice but to drop the matter :( but it's good in a way :) hehe..
there are some people with whom we actually fight to forget...its really a special bond we've with them that makes us forget everything...but that's not true with everyone... :(wish it could be possible... ;)
it's difficult but we must learn to forgive and forget at the same time otherwise the hurt will linger....i love your haiku! thanks for sharing!
thanks J... :)
these are beautiful!
thanks magic... :)
Very beautiful and true, why can't we forget?
its really a big question dear...an unsolved mystery I guess... :)
Both are so true!...very thoughtful and motivating...and not able to forget is the depth of scar created in our heart
yeaahhh...thanks Valli... :)
Supreb ....loved it!
thanks Shamsud... :)
thanks Patti... :)
Gems of truth ~~ nice! Day 11 ~~ Possible
thanks becca... :)
Deep hurts can never be forgotten. They are seared into the soul and, like scars, cannot be obliterated.“Maybe Raven Knows”
maybe...but can't this be ignored...??? :O
wow! this is what we call a talent of a poet :) with a possible 2 perspective :) lovely!
haha...thank you so much Sowmya... :)
loved the second one ..thanks for sharing !
Thank you alka... :)
Both are Awesome!You are going great with each of your haiku :)
Thanku so much dear... :)