Life's Like That...!!!

HE will keep testing you from time to time and you will see lots of UP's and DOWN's......try to never give up, you will definitely succeed in HIS test.....

Isn't time Running Out

Friday, April 13, 2012

Warmth: A Haiku...!!!



once emerged from warmth
of womb, he again got laid
calmly in her womb


Written for: Haiku-Heights(part of The April Heights Month)

PS: One day everyone of us will get down to ashes or get buried in the womb of mother earth...

36 comments:

  1. true.. good one... we end at the beginning. we begin at the end..

    nice one Sarab!!:)

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  2. its not the end, its the beginning of a new life ...nice :)

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    1. rightly said Surbhi...thanks... :)

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  3. This is beautifull..I would have loved to see it without picture.. excellent haiku and thought..

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  4. I have responded.. my haiku is 2-5-2..done deliberately..I wanted say maximum in minimum words after writing chains of haiku for months now.. it is OK as long as it is less than 17 syllables.. and it shows..thanks any way for being elert.. you pointed right based on what you understand of haiku..thanks..

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  5. The cycle of life beautifully described!

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  6. sensual and true to life ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  7. Beautiful, provocative haiku. Thank you

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    1. thanks Ellecee...you're welcome... :)

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  8. An excellent take at the prompt! Eternal truth... :)

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  9. Awesome Haiku :) :D.
    Man you are an expert :D :).
    Hats off :).

    Ps. I have a small award for you :D :). http://sweetsomethingz.blogspot.in/2012/04/awesomeness-personified.html

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    1. thanku so much Poo...but still I've not forgotten that who put me into this...thanks a lot Poo... :)
      thanks for the award...I'll catch you for it at your page... :)

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  10. Nice take on cycle of life ~

    http://everydayamazin.blogspot.ca/2012/04/haibun-empty.html

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  11. And such is the cycle of life.

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  12. Thoughtful one!....Beautifully penned :)

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  13. the cycle of birth and death... nice haiku man...

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  14. beautifully done:)

    my take: http://njn-sorceress.blogspot.in/

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  15. nice... though the phrase 'get laid' invokes mixed reactions :)

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    1. yeaahhh...in a way actually it does... :)

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  16. your are super incredible with haikus:)

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