Fate: A Haiku...!!!


Blaming our fate, for
Destiny reached, we ignore
Our deeds, who framed it.

Written for: Haiku-Heights

Comments

  1. Sushma HarishMarch 6, 2012 at 4:18 PM

    fate and destiny
    cant be planned,so
    live life with flow

    cheers

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  2. AmitAagMarch 6, 2012 at 4:30 PM

    Very well written Sarabjeet!

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  3. abhinavrMarch 6, 2012 at 4:47 PM

    Beautiful lines.. well done

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  4. SurbhiMarch 6, 2012 at 4:59 PM

    xactly :)

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  5. SimranMarch 6, 2012 at 5:05 PM

    Wow!
    Amazing the way you framed this fact with perfect words :)

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  6. KajalMarch 6, 2012 at 5:12 PM

    Sarabjeet.. your Haiku is getting better and better . Love this one. Very crisp:)

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  7. anatreekMarch 6, 2012 at 6:50 PM

    Yes, you are getting better..this is really good!

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  8. Deepak KarthikMarch 6, 2012 at 7:01 PM

    You are rocking with Haiku :)
    well done bro.

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  9. BikramMarch 7, 2012 at 12:13 AM

    WOWO.. AWESOME and what a true statement .. blaming fate for the destiny when we forget what we have done

    Bikram's

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  10. RajMarch 7, 2012 at 7:23 AM

    That was really profound. Brilliant one.

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  11. Sujatha SathyaMarch 7, 2012 at 10:02 AM

    haikus are so tough to word
    this is a good one

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  12. PranitaMarch 7, 2012 at 12:37 PM

    Whoa! Deep... lovely... and intense!
    All in three sentences... amazing!

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  13. LeoPawMarch 7, 2012 at 1:48 PM

    Good one. Haikus are tough, and you seem to be mastering it day by day.

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  14. UnknownMarch 7, 2012 at 2:07 PM

    well said... and well framed !

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  15. UnknownMarch 7, 2012 at 10:16 PM

    beautiful lines.... :)

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  16. ArnieMarch 7, 2012 at 11:47 PM

    Another set of amazing lines from the Haiku King :)

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  17. UnknownMarch 7, 2012 at 11:51 PM

    Sarabjit - very beautifully said !!

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  18. Shamsud AhmedMarch 8, 2012 at 12:20 AM

    good one..enjoyed reading. thanks for sharing.

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  19. Princess PooMarch 8, 2012 at 10:31 AM

    Wow. Just wow.
    Couldn't be more perfect :).
    So beautiful Cynosure jhi :).

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    1. CYNOSUREMarch 8, 2012 at 8:03 PM

      Its always good to get complimented from the person from you got inspired... :P

      Thanku so much... :)

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  20. AnonymousMarch 8, 2012 at 11:30 AM

    True words...
    fate and destiny ever so entwined,
    in a porcelain future we designed

    -ur latest follower

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    1. CYNOSUREMarch 8, 2012 at 8:03 PM

      Thanks Autopublie...Nice to see u here... :)

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  21. UnknownMarch 8, 2012 at 1:29 PM

    I love this one! Very meaningful!!
    Keep going on like this! B)

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  22. Magical Mystical TeacherMarch 8, 2012 at 6:20 PM

    Deed by deed we build our fate. Is that it?

    Fate Has Blessed Them

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  23. Vinay Leo R.March 9, 2012 at 9:36 PM

    True. both fate and destiny, it depends on us.

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  24. AnonymousMarch 11, 2012 at 11:19 PM

    well written!

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