When the mind sways, And when the same feelings this heart portrays, And when pot is also not left with enough ink, so when the quill says, Words on the parchment feel like a cheap fabric that frays. So many lines fumbled, So many feelings got crumbled, Like someone feels when they get ghosted, Those letters, in the drawer, always remained unposted. PS: Most of my posts are late night musings. Either way, the letter posted or not, the things I write reach this online platform or not, it feels good to scribble down random words once in a while.
fate and destiny
ReplyDeletecant be planned,so
live life with flow
cheers
its complicated... :P
DeleteVery well written Sarabjeet!
ReplyDeletethanks Amit... :)
DeleteBeautiful lines.. well done
ReplyDeletethanku Abhinav... :)
Deletexactly :)
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DeleteWow!
ReplyDeleteAmazing the way you framed this fact with perfect words :)
thanku so much Simran... :)
DeleteSarabjeet.. your Haiku is getting better and better . Love this one. Very crisp:)
ReplyDeleteThanku so much Kajal... :)
DeleteYes, you are getting better..this is really good!
ReplyDeletehaha...thanks Ana... :)
DeleteYou are rocking with Haiku :)
ReplyDeletewell done bro.
;) thanku-thanku... ;)
DeleteWOWO.. AWESOME and what a true statement .. blaming fate for the destiny when we forget what we have done
ReplyDeleteBikram's
@Bikram...thanks...:)
DeleteThat was really profound. Brilliant one.
ReplyDeleteThanks Raj... :)
Deletehaikus are so tough to word
ReplyDeletethis is a good one
Thanku so much Sujatha... :)
DeleteWhoa! Deep... lovely... and intense!
ReplyDeleteAll in three sentences... amazing!
@pranita... thanks... :)
DeleteGood one. Haikus are tough, and you seem to be mastering it day by day.
ReplyDeleteThanks Leo... :)
Deletewell said... and well framed !
ReplyDeleteThanku Alka... :)
Deletebeautiful lines.... :)
ReplyDeleteThanku Saikat... :)
DeleteAnother set of amazing lines from the Haiku King :)
ReplyDeletehaha...Thanks a Lot Arnab... :)
DeleteSarabjit - very beautifully said !!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Sangeeta... :)
Deletegood one..enjoyed reading. thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteWow. Just wow.
ReplyDeleteCouldn't be more perfect :).
So beautiful Cynosure jhi :).
Its always good to get complimented from the person from you got inspired... :P
DeleteThanku so much... :)
True words...
ReplyDeletefate and destiny ever so entwined,
in a porcelain future we designed
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Thanks Autopublie...Nice to see u here... :)
DeleteI love this one! Very meaningful!!
ReplyDeleteKeep going on like this! B)
Thanks a lot my friend... :)
DeleteDeed by deed we build our fate. Is that it?
ReplyDeleteFate Has Blessed Them
Exactly... :)
DeleteTrue. both fate and destiny, it depends on us.
ReplyDeleteHmmm...:)
Deletewell written!
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