Eager: A Haiku...!!!



eagerness to end
with neglected efforts; leaves
us with only despair

Written for: Haiku-Heights(part of The April Heights Month)

PS: If we don't give required efforts to the task to which we're desperate to complete; at the end despair is the only thing we're left with...


Comments

  1. AnonymousApril 1, 2012 at 12:35 AM

    Truly this does have a desperate feel to it.

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  2. Jen..The Butterfly EffectApril 1, 2012 at 1:50 AM

    Amazing.wow

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  3. Bruce MillerApril 1, 2012 at 2:25 AM

    effort is the key to success :)

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  4. GraceApril 1, 2012 at 3:10 AM

    I hear your despair ~

    Nice one ~

    http://everydayamazin.blogspot.ca/2012/03/eager.html

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  5. ElleceeApril 1, 2012 at 3:13 AM

    Thought provoking haiku. Well done.

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  6. ElleceeApril 1, 2012 at 3:13 AM

    Thought provoking haiku. Well done.

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  7. Magical Mystical TeacherApril 1, 2012 at 4:18 AM

    Eagerness can get derailed, that's for sure!

    Eager to Write Haiku

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  8. carol l mckennaApril 1, 2012 at 5:47 AM

    True enough ~ well written ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  9. Maude LynnApril 1, 2012 at 6:39 AM

    Very true!

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  10. UnknownApril 1, 2012 at 10:34 AM

    That's so correct ! Well written.

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  11. Ramesh SoodApril 1, 2012 at 11:50 AM

    A true statement that...and I am happy to find an eager and curious soul here...good one..

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    1. CYNOSUREApril 1, 2012 at 7:36 PM

      I'm very curious RS... ;)
      thanks a lot... :)

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  12. Fida BosuApril 1, 2012 at 3:41 PM

    precisely! Love it ;)

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  13. ChèvrefeuilleApril 1, 2012 at 4:56 PM

    This is so true. A haiku with a spiritual touch. Thank you.

    Namaste

    My contribution to the Haiku Heights April Challenge:

    http://chevrefeuilleshaikublog.blogspot.com/2012/04/blog-post.html

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  14. Kinara :)April 1, 2012 at 6:50 PM

    In little words,
    you teach me moral
    for the entire life!
    Nice one man!:)

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  15. KajalApril 1, 2012 at 8:13 PM

    Truer words were not spoken... you are acing the Haiku :)

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  16. UnknownApril 1, 2012 at 8:32 PM

    true and nicely put.. nice haiku, Sarab.

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  17. Hariharan ValadyApril 1, 2012 at 8:44 PM

    Very well said. The PS also sounds like a poem.

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    1. CYNOSUREApril 1, 2012 at 11:25 PM

      thats a sweet complement...thanks a lot HV... :)

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  18. UnknownApril 1, 2012 at 8:53 PM

    my attempt : http://blackandwhiteheart.wordpress.com/2012/04/01/careful-with-your-eagerness-haiku/

    my recommends from the submitted haiku :

    1) Kinara : http://kshahzworld.blogspot.in/2012/04/eager.html

    2) Teresa :
    http://kshahzworld.blogspot.in/2012/04/eager.html

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    1. CYNOSUREApril 1, 2012 at 11:33 PM

      Thanks Jayanth...I might have missed them... :)

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  19. SimranApril 1, 2012 at 9:00 PM

    So true!
    Beautifully written! :)

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  20. Arun KumarApril 1, 2012 at 10:05 PM

    Nice one. Wonderfully written.

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  21. AnonymousApril 1, 2012 at 11:08 PM

    so sos sad

     four eager senryu

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  22. Sri ValliApril 2, 2012 at 12:07 AM

    Your haiku speaks reality!...Beautifully penned

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  23. AmitAagApril 2, 2012 at 10:26 AM

    So thoughtful, Sarabjeet, and beautifully penned!

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  24. Vinay Leo R.April 2, 2012 at 10:46 PM

    Absolutely, Sarab! Very on the money, this one!

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  25. Ashwini C NApril 2, 2012 at 11:15 PM

    It is often those silly decisions which we make in less than a split second, that leaves a huge impact on us, forever!

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  26. Someone is SpecialApril 3, 2012 at 2:00 AM

    you are really a master in choosing the right picture for your beautiful touching words.. how great it is to read your sweet comment when I was in your blog.. by the way when are you planning to sleep?

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    1. CYNOSUREApril 3, 2012 at 4:11 PM

      Thanku So much Saravana... :)

      the vice-versa I've experienced with you too... :P

      ooo...when I'm planning to sleep...I'm a nocturnal creature...so u cant guess when I'll be sleeping... ;) :P

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  27. Akshay Kumar GApril 3, 2012 at 3:05 PM

    You are getting better and better with this style of writing. Loved this one too. :)

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  28. Harshita SrivastavaApril 4, 2012 at 10:30 PM

    And that is why i am never eager to do any work...Laziness rocks ;)
    haha
    btw this is such a thought provoking line...I should try to apply it

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    1. CYNOSUREApril 4, 2012 at 10:33 PM

      You're also an engineer Harshita...and we're supposed to be lazy...and we always rock... :D :D :D
      lolzzz... :P

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