eagerness to end
with neglected efforts; leaves
us with only despair
Written for: Haiku-Heights(part of The April Heights Month)
PS: If we don't give required efforts to the task to which we're desperate to complete; at the end despair is the only thing we're left with...
Truly this does have a desperate feel to it.
ReplyDeleteyou're guessed it right bro... :)
DeleteAmazing.wow
ReplyDeleteThanks Jen... :)
Deleteeffort is the key to success :)
ReplyDeleteyup...exactly... :)
DeleteI hear your despair ~
ReplyDeleteNice one ~
http://everydayamazin.blogspot.ca/2012/03/eager.html
then you missed a lot... :)
DeleteThought provoking haiku. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ellecee... :)
DeleteThought provoking haiku. Well done.
ReplyDeleteEagerness can get derailed, that's for sure!
ReplyDeleteEager to Write Haiku
yeaahhh...so true.... :)
DeleteTrue enough ~ well written ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Carol...and namaste ji... :)
DeleteVery true!
ReplyDeletethanks Mama... :)
DeleteThat's so correct ! Well written.
ReplyDeleteThanku Abhinav... :)
DeleteA true statement that...and I am happy to find an eager and curious soul here...good one..
ReplyDeleteI'm very curious RS... ;)
Deletethanks a lot... :)
precisely! Love it ;)
ReplyDeleteThanks Fida... :)
DeleteThis is so true. A haiku with a spiritual touch. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteNamaste
My contribution to the Haiku Heights April Challenge:
http://chevrefeuilleshaikublog.blogspot.com/2012/04/blog-post.html
Thanku KP... :)
DeleteIn little words,
ReplyDeleteyou teach me moral
for the entire life!
Nice one man!:)
Thanks Kinara...You're most welcome... :)
DeleteTruer words were not spoken... you are acing the Haiku :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Kajal... :)
Deletetrue and nicely put.. nice haiku, Sarab.
ReplyDeleteThanks Jayanth... :)
DeleteVery well said. The PS also sounds like a poem.
ReplyDeletethats a sweet complement...thanks a lot HV... :)
Deletemy attempt : http://blackandwhiteheart.wordpress.com/2012/04/01/careful-with-your-eagerness-haiku/
ReplyDeletemy recommends from the submitted haiku :
1) Kinara : http://kshahzworld.blogspot.in/2012/04/eager.html
2) Teresa :
http://kshahzworld.blogspot.in/2012/04/eager.html
Thanks Jayanth...I might have missed them... :)
DeleteSo true!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written! :)
Thanks a lot Dear... :)
DeleteNice one. Wonderfully written.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Arun... :)
Deleteso sos sad
ReplyDeletefour eager senryu
:) :)
DeleteYour haiku speaks reality!...Beautifully penned
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Valli... :)
DeleteSo thoughtful, Sarabjeet, and beautifully penned!
ReplyDeleteThanks Amit... :)
DeleteAbsolutely, Sarab! Very on the money, this one!
ReplyDeleteThanku Leo... :)
DeleteIt is often those silly decisions which we make in less than a split second, that leaves a huge impact on us, forever!
ReplyDeleteVery true...rightly said Ashwini... :)
Deleteyou are really a master in choosing the right picture for your beautiful touching words.. how great it is to read your sweet comment when I was in your blog.. by the way when are you planning to sleep?
ReplyDeleteThanku So much Saravana... :)
Deletethe vice-versa I've experienced with you too... :P
ooo...when I'm planning to sleep...I'm a nocturnal creature...so u cant guess when I'll be sleeping... ;) :P
You are getting better and better with this style of writing. Loved this one too. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Akshay... :)
DeleteAnd that is why i am never eager to do any work...Laziness rocks ;)
ReplyDeletehaha
btw this is such a thought provoking line...I should try to apply it
You're also an engineer Harshita...and we're supposed to be lazy...and we always rock... :D :D :D
Deletelolzzz... :P