My daddy wakes me up at six in the morning, And says, "Wake up, it's time to go to school." My mommy helps me put my uniform, It make me look so cool. Shoes, yes. Tie, yes. Daddy and mommy said, "God bless". Before I forget, ID Card. Yeaassss. Mommy packed my lunch. Yumm... Yumm... Yumm... Going to school is merry. Because I sing with my friends, "Humm... Humm... Humm..." Ooppss, the bus has come, So I ran in a hurry. Driver uncle said, "I'll wait, Please don't worry." I board my bus at seven, Off it goes.. zooooom. We do our assembly, And then go to classroom. I love doing drawing, Ms. Lily is my favorite teacher. Friendly and always smiling, She calls me "Naughty little creature". We eat our lunch, And play in the afternoon. Sometimes I play hide and seek, Sometimes I play with balloons. We then study math, Two candy and two candy, makes it four. Then we study science, I love how tiger roar. Oooowww, it's time to go h
Truly this does have a desperate feel to it.
ReplyDeleteyou're guessed it right bro... :)
DeleteAmazing.wow
ReplyDeleteThanks Jen... :)
Deleteeffort is the key to success :)
ReplyDeleteyup...exactly... :)
DeleteI hear your despair ~
ReplyDeleteNice one ~
http://everydayamazin.blogspot.ca/2012/03/eager.html
then you missed a lot... :)
DeleteThought provoking haiku. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ellecee... :)
DeleteThought provoking haiku. Well done.
ReplyDeleteEagerness can get derailed, that's for sure!
ReplyDeleteEager to Write Haiku
yeaahhh...so true.... :)
DeleteTrue enough ~ well written ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Carol...and namaste ji... :)
DeleteVery true!
ReplyDeletethanks Mama... :)
DeleteThat's so correct ! Well written.
ReplyDeleteThanku Abhinav... :)
DeleteA true statement that...and I am happy to find an eager and curious soul here...good one..
ReplyDeleteI'm very curious RS... ;)
Deletethanks a lot... :)
precisely! Love it ;)
ReplyDeleteThanks Fida... :)
DeleteThis is so true. A haiku with a spiritual touch. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteNamaste
My contribution to the Haiku Heights April Challenge:
http://chevrefeuilleshaikublog.blogspot.com/2012/04/blog-post.html
Thanku KP... :)
DeleteIn little words,
ReplyDeleteyou teach me moral
for the entire life!
Nice one man!:)
Thanks Kinara...You're most welcome... :)
DeleteTruer words were not spoken... you are acing the Haiku :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Kajal... :)
Deletetrue and nicely put.. nice haiku, Sarab.
ReplyDeleteThanks Jayanth... :)
DeleteVery well said. The PS also sounds like a poem.
ReplyDeletethats a sweet complement...thanks a lot HV... :)
Deletemy attempt : http://blackandwhiteheart.wordpress.com/2012/04/01/careful-with-your-eagerness-haiku/
ReplyDeletemy recommends from the submitted haiku :
1) Kinara : http://kshahzworld.blogspot.in/2012/04/eager.html
2) Teresa :
http://kshahzworld.blogspot.in/2012/04/eager.html
Thanks Jayanth...I might have missed them... :)
DeleteSo true!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written! :)
Thanks a lot Dear... :)
DeleteNice one. Wonderfully written.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Arun... :)
Deleteso sos sad
ReplyDeletefour eager senryu
Your haiku speaks reality!...Beautifully penned
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Valli... :)
DeleteSo thoughtful, Sarabjeet, and beautifully penned!
ReplyDeleteThanks Amit... :)
DeleteAbsolutely, Sarab! Very on the money, this one!
ReplyDeleteThanku Leo... :)
DeleteVery true...rightly said Ashwini... :)
ReplyDeleteyou are really a master in choosing the right picture for your beautiful touching words.. how great it is to read your sweet comment when I was in your blog.. by the way when are you planning to sleep?
ReplyDeleteThanku So much Saravana... :)
Deletethe vice-versa I've experienced with you too... :P
ooo...when I'm planning to sleep...I'm a nocturnal creature...so u cant guess when I'll be sleeping... ;) :P
You are getting better and better with this style of writing. Loved this one too. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Akshay... :)
DeleteAnd that is why i am never eager to do any work...Laziness rocks ;)
ReplyDeletehaha
btw this is such a thought provoking line...I should try to apply it
You're also an engineer Harshita...and we're supposed to be lazy...and we always rock... :D :D :D
Deletelolzzz... :P