My daddy wakes me up at six in the morning, And says, "Wake up, it's time to go to school." My mommy helps me put my uniform, It make me look so cool. Shoes, yes. Tie, yes. Daddy and mommy said, "God bless". Before I forget, ID Card. Yeaassss. Mommy packed my lunch. Yumm... Yumm... Yumm... Going to school is merry. Because I sing with my friends, "Humm... Humm... Humm..." Ooppss, the bus has come, So I ran in a hurry. Driver uncle said, "I'll wait, Please don't worry." I board my bus at seven, Off it goes.. zooooom. We do our assembly, And then go to classroom. I love doing drawing, Ms. Lily is my favorite teacher. Friendly and always smiling, She calls me "Naughty little creature". We eat our lunch, And play in the afternoon. Sometimes I play hide and seek, Sometimes I play with balloons. We then study math, Two candy and two candy, makes it four. Then we study science, I love how tiger roar. Oooowww, it's time to go h
wonderful Sarab.. loved it..so true..
ReplyDelete"they'll die themselves" : stroooongg !!
"grace of love" : beautifully written..
thanks a lot buddy... :)
DeleteLoved both haiku....Beautifully written
ReplyDeletethanks a lot Valli... :)
DeleteI like the line.. They will die themselves.. indeed I have seen it..
ReplyDelete@RS... :) thanks... ;)
DeleteLoved your first one and agree totally.. although the second one makes sense.. I really find it very difficult to forget. I forgive easily but forgetting is something I have to learn to do fast too..:(
ReplyDeleteKajal, you make such a good point. Sometimes we forgive but don't forget. I guess when bygones truly becomes bygones can we achieve that state of total forgiveness.
Deleteright Bhavna..
DeleteI just asked for forgiveness because I myself is very bad at forgetting...u know na...i have a very sharp memory... :P
Deletethanks... :)
By the way i still have one doubt...can total forgiveness can be achieved without forgetting...??? :O
DeleteForgetting is difficult for me too!
DeleteWill She Forgive Us?
I enjoyed your set of haiku very much. I like the words "grace of virtue" Without forgiveness it is very difficult to move on.
ReplyDeleterightly said Ellecee...thanks... :)
DeleteSecond Haiku.... very intense that!!!!! Loved both... :)
ReplyDeletethanku so much miss... :)
Deleteexcellent haiku ~ tribute to life and death ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^
ReplyDeleteThanku so much Carol... :)
DeleteNice set...specially the second one, I never thought of forgiveness this way ~
ReplyDeleteI'm really glad you liked it... :)
DeleteThe first haiku is like some thoughts setting the stage for the powerful drama in the second!
ReplyDeleteThat something I too didn't noticed...thanks Gemma... :)
DeleteWow, so powerful! Love it! Anyway forgiveness is the sweetest revenge ;)
ReplyDeleteyeaaahhh it is indeed...thanks... :)
Deletethey die themselves...is cruel phrase...human forgiveness moves beyond . its about reaching out .and reaching in ...
ReplyDeletehmmm...it went a bit cruel...but somtimes cruel phrase are easy to get... :)
Deletethanks debu... :)
Yes, if you forgive, these bad feelings would disappear. 'They' here I would take to mean the 'bad feelings' not people. Great thinking!
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thats really a sweet thought "bad feelings" instead of "people"...thanks... :)
DeleteEvery day when I read your haiku ... I am in awe. Wonderfully composed this set. Very spiritual.
ReplyDeleteThanku so much KP... :)
Deleteterse verses are so hard to write!!! Neat Haikus, Cynosure!
ReplyDeletethanku so much Bhavana... :)
Deleteloved the 2nd!!
ReplyDeleteI really liked the second.
ReplyDeletethanks Patti... :)
DeleteTruth of life..forgive and they will die, and you will get a life with complete freedom.
ReplyDeletethanks Mohinee... :)
DeleteThis was a good one. :-)
ReplyDeletethanks a lot Zeba... :)
DeleteI loved the last line...keep it up...
ReplyDeleteBless ya
thanku so much Harshita... :)
DeleteGOD bless u too dear... :)
Aww :) So beautiful!
ReplyDeleteso nice sarabjeet :)
ReplyDeleteThanku Ms. Chugh... ;)
DeleteVery nice!! :)
ReplyDeleteThis is my Day 7 ~~ Dear Self.
thanks Becca... :)
DeleteI loved the second one..too good
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Ana... :)
DeleteI second Kajal...gud pc of wrk !
ReplyDeleteThanks Alka... :)
Deletei used to think this was a defeatist attitude, but it works
ReplyDeleteIt surely works...but obviously never let anyone hurt you dear...never be a coward...but be polite... :)
Deleteindeed... :)
ReplyDeleteHello. You have a very nice blog :)
ReplyDeleteThis one is very simple yet so strong. Loved it!
P.s - Why is this 'Haiku' in all your posts?
thats so sweet of you vivaciousfreak...thanks for dropping by... :)
DeletePS: you asked for why I’m having “Haiku” in all my posts…actually April is celebrated as month of poets where everyone writes atleast one poem everyday…and “Haiku” is a form of Japanese poetry, which is non-rhyming and written in 3 lines under some specific conditions…and I’m just trying that only…so you gonna find this word everyday till 30th april on my every post… :P ;)
take care… :)
They will die themselves. I love your Haiku Set..
ReplyDeleteThanku so much SIS... :)
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