Possible: A Haiku...!!!




if exists,
then possible; not?
create it

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possible
to forgive; but not
forget, why?


Written for: Haiku-Heights(part of The April Heights Month)

PS: The second Haiku was inspired from my conversation in the comment with Kajal on my post Forgive: A Haiku... :)

Comments

  1. Sankara Jayanth SApril 11, 2012 at 12:04 AM

    the second one goes deep beyond the 11 syllables.!! superbly written Sarabjeet! :)

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  2. PranitaApril 11, 2012 at 12:05 AM

    Lovely... both! Very very nice!
    Loved the first one very much... Create it!!! So true.. :)

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    1. CYNOSUREApril 11, 2012 at 10:25 PM

      Thanks...was expecting similar reply from an engineering student... ;)

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  3. SurbhiApril 11, 2012 at 12:07 AM

    very intense and practical ... good 1 :)

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  4. Ramesh SoodApril 11, 2012 at 12:10 AM

    Good ones Sarabjeet..trust me.. even forgiving is on the surface.. really you are never fully able to fogive the mistakes of heart..and that's why you never forget... you inspired me to think.. Thankyou.. dear..

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    1. CYNOSUREApril 11, 2012 at 10:27 PM

      thats really an honor for me...thanks a lot RS...you are welcome... :)

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  5. ElleceeApril 11, 2012 at 12:32 AM

    Why not "create it" indeed. And the second one we work with always. Very nice.

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  6. Someone is SpecialApril 11, 2012 at 3:09 AM

    why???? Because we are humans..

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    1. CYNOSUREApril 11, 2012 at 10:28 PM

      that might be one of the reasons... :O
      thanks SIS... :)

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  7. GraceApril 11, 2012 at 6:25 AM

    I believe in creating so its always possible ~

    Intriguing haiku ~

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  8. Maude LynnApril 11, 2012 at 6:43 AM

    I really like that second one!

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  9. ChèvrefeuilleApril 11, 2012 at 6:53 AM

    Again a set of nice haiku with a deeper meaning. Especially the second one surprised me. Thank you for sharing.

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  10. Fida BosuApril 11, 2012 at 7:45 AM

    I really like both! Really meaningful.. Why can't forget? I always forgot what makes me upset.. :) I'll start argument with hubby and when he asked why am I angry, I can't remember why but I know I'm upset with him.. so no other choice but to drop the matter :( but it's good in a way :) hehe..

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    1. CYNOSUREApril 11, 2012 at 10:36 PM

      there are some people with whom we actually fight to forget...its really a special bond we've with them that makes us forget everything...but that's not true with everyone... :(
      wish it could be possible... ;)

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  11. Jeannette,April 11, 2012 at 7:53 AM

    it's difficult but we must learn to forgive and forget at the same time otherwise the hurt will linger....i love your haiku! thanks for sharing!

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  12. Mohini PuranikApril 11, 2012 at 3:33 PM

    Very beautiful and true, why can't we forget?

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    1. CYNOSUREApril 11, 2012 at 10:40 PM

      its really a big question dear...an unsolved mystery I guess... :)

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  13. Sri ValliApril 11, 2012 at 5:24 PM

    Both are so true!...very thoughtful and motivating...
    and not able to forget is the depth of scar created in our heart

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  14. Shamsud AhmedApril 11, 2012 at 8:17 PM

    Supreb ....loved it!

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  15. PattiKenApril 11, 2012 at 8:26 PM

    Very philosophical!

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  16. CYNOSUREApril 11, 2012 at 10:38 PM

    thanks magic... :)

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  17. AnonymousApril 11, 2012 at 11:45 PM

    Gems of truth ~~ nice! Day 11 ~~ Possible

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  18. Magical Mystical TeacherApril 12, 2012 at 6:16 AM

    Deep hurts can never be forgotten. They are seared into the soul and, like scars, cannot be obliterated.

    “Maybe Raven Knows”

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  19. smiling soulApril 12, 2012 at 12:07 PM

    wow! this is what we call a talent of a poet :) with a possible 2 perspective :) lovely!

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  20. UnknownApril 12, 2012 at 12:57 PM

    loved the second one ..thanks for sharing !

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  21. SimranApril 15, 2012 at 9:06 PM

    Both are Awesome!
    You are going great with each of your haiku :)

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