My daddy wakes me up at six in the morning, And says, "Wake up, it's time to go to school." My mommy helps me put my uniform, It make me look so cool. Shoes, yes. Tie, yes. Daddy and mommy said, "God bless". Before I forget, ID Card. Yeaassss. Mommy packed my lunch. Yumm... Yumm... Yumm... Going to school is merry. Because I sing with my friends, "Humm... Humm... Humm..." Ooppss, the bus has come, So I ran in a hurry. Driver uncle said, "I'll wait, Please don't worry." I board my bus at seven, Off it goes.. zooooom. We do our assembly, And then go to classroom. I love doing drawing, Ms. Lily is my favorite teacher. Friendly and always smiling, She calls me "Naughty little creature". We eat our lunch, And play in the afternoon. Sometimes I play hide and seek, Sometimes I play with balloons. We then study math, Two candy and two candy, makes it four. Then we study science, I love how tiger roar. Oooowww, it's time to go h
the second one goes deep beyond the 11 syllables.!! superbly written Sarabjeet! :)
ReplyDeletethank you so much man...thanks a lot... :)
DeleteLovely... both! Very very nice!
ReplyDeleteLoved the first one very much... Create it!!! So true.. :)
Thanks...was expecting similar reply from an engineering student... ;)
Deletevery intense and practical ... good 1 :)
ReplyDeletethanks dear... :)
DeleteGood ones Sarabjeet..trust me.. even forgiving is on the surface.. really you are never fully able to fogive the mistakes of heart..and that's why you never forget... you inspired me to think.. Thankyou.. dear..
ReplyDeletethats really an honor for me...thanks a lot RS...you are welcome... :)
DeleteWhy not "create it" indeed. And the second one we work with always. Very nice.
ReplyDeleteyou're right Ellecee...thanks... :)
Deletewhy???? Because we are humans..
ReplyDeletethat might be one of the reasons... :O
Deletethanks SIS... :)
I believe in creating so its always possible ~
ReplyDeleteIntriguing haiku ~
thanks Grace... :)
DeleteI really like that second one!
ReplyDeletethanks Mama... :)
DeleteAgain a set of nice haiku with a deeper meaning. Especially the second one surprised me. Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot man... :)
DeleteI really like both! Really meaningful.. Why can't forget? I always forgot what makes me upset.. :) I'll start argument with hubby and when he asked why am I angry, I can't remember why but I know I'm upset with him.. so no other choice but to drop the matter :( but it's good in a way :) hehe..
ReplyDeletethere are some people with whom we actually fight to forget...its really a special bond we've with them that makes us forget everything...but that's not true with everyone... :(
Deletewish it could be possible... ;)
it's difficult but we must learn to forgive and forget at the same time otherwise the hurt will linger....i love your haiku! thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeletethanks J... :)
DeleteVery beautiful and true, why can't we forget?
ReplyDeleteits really a big question dear...an unsolved mystery I guess... :)
DeleteBoth are so true!...very thoughtful and motivating...
ReplyDeleteand not able to forget is the depth of scar created in our heart
yeaahhh...thanks Valli... :)
DeleteSupreb ....loved it!
ReplyDeletethanks Shamsud... :)
DeleteVery philosophical!
ReplyDeletethanks Patti... :)
Deletethanks magic... :)
ReplyDeleteGems of truth ~~ nice! Day 11 ~~ Possible
ReplyDeletethanks becca... :)
DeleteDeep hurts can never be forgotten. They are seared into the soul and, like scars, cannot be obliterated.
ReplyDelete“Maybe Raven Knows”
maybe...but can't this be ignored...??? :O
Deletewow! this is what we call a talent of a poet :) with a possible 2 perspective :) lovely!
ReplyDeletehaha...thank you so much Sowmya... :)
Deleteloved the second one ..thanks for sharing !
ReplyDeleteThank you alka... :)
DeleteBoth are Awesome!
ReplyDeleteYou are going great with each of your haiku :)
Thanku so much dear... :)
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