Possible: A Haiku...!!!




if exists,
then possible; not?
create it

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possible
to forgive; but not
forget, why?


Written for: Haiku-Heights(part of The April Heights Month)

PS: The second Haiku was inspired from my conversation in the comment with Kajal on my post Forgive: A Haiku... :)

Comments

  1. the second one goes deep beyond the 11 syllables.!! superbly written Sarabjeet! :)

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  2. Lovely... both! Very very nice!
    Loved the first one very much... Create it!!! So true.. :)

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    1. Thanks...was expecting similar reply from an engineering student... ;)

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  3. very intense and practical ... good 1 :)

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  4. Good ones Sarabjeet..trust me.. even forgiving is on the surface.. really you are never fully able to fogive the mistakes of heart..and that's why you never forget... you inspired me to think.. Thankyou.. dear..

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    1. thats really an honor for me...thanks a lot RS...you are welcome... :)

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  5. Why not "create it" indeed. And the second one we work with always. Very nice.

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    1. that might be one of the reasons... :O
      thanks SIS... :)

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  7. I believe in creating so its always possible ~

    Intriguing haiku ~

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  8. Again a set of nice haiku with a deeper meaning. Especially the second one surprised me. Thank you for sharing.

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  9. I really like both! Really meaningful.. Why can't forget? I always forgot what makes me upset.. :) I'll start argument with hubby and when he asked why am I angry, I can't remember why but I know I'm upset with him.. so no other choice but to drop the matter :( but it's good in a way :) hehe..

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    1. there are some people with whom we actually fight to forget...its really a special bond we've with them that makes us forget everything...but that's not true with everyone... :(
      wish it could be possible... ;)

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  10. it's difficult but we must learn to forgive and forget at the same time otherwise the hurt will linger....i love your haiku! thanks for sharing!

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  11. Very beautiful and true, why can't we forget?

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    1. its really a big question dear...an unsolved mystery I guess... :)

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  12. Both are so true!...very thoughtful and motivating...
    and not able to forget is the depth of scar created in our heart

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  13. Deep hurts can never be forgotten. They are seared into the soul and, like scars, cannot be obliterated.

    “Maybe Raven Knows”

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    1. maybe...but can't this be ignored...??? :O

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  14. wow! this is what we call a talent of a poet :) with a possible 2 perspective :) lovely!

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  15. loved the second one ..thanks for sharing !

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  16. Both are Awesome!
    You are going great with each of your haiku :)

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