Warmth: A Haiku...!!!



once emerged from warmth
of womb, he again got laid
calmly in her womb


Written for: Haiku-Heights(part of The April Heights Month)

PS: One day everyone of us will get down to ashes or get buried in the womb of mother earth...

Comments

  1. Sankara Jayanth SApril 13, 2012 at 12:03 AM

    true.. good one... we end at the beginning. we begin at the end..

    nice one Sarab!!:)

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  2. SurbhiApril 13, 2012 at 12:11 AM

    its not the end, its the beginning of a new life ...nice :)

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  3. Ramesh SoodApril 13, 2012 at 12:13 AM

    This is beautifull..I would have loved to see it without picture.. excellent haiku and thought..

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  4. Ramesh SoodApril 13, 2012 at 12:28 AM

    I have responded.. my haiku is 2-5-2..done deliberately..I wanted say maximum in minimum words after writing chains of haiku for months now.. it is OK as long as it is less than 17 syllables.. and it shows..thanks any way for being elert.. you pointed right based on what you understand of haiku..thanks..

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  5. Gemma WisemanApril 13, 2012 at 1:57 AM

    The cycle of life beautifully described!

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  6. carol l mckennaApril 13, 2012 at 6:40 AM

    sensual and true to life ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  7. ElleceeApril 13, 2012 at 7:07 AM

    Beautiful, provocative haiku. Thank you

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  8. PranitaApril 13, 2012 at 9:34 AM

    An excellent take at the prompt! Eternal truth... :)

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  9. abhinavrApril 13, 2012 at 10:06 AM

    That's a beautiful thought !

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  10. Princess PooApril 13, 2012 at 2:59 PM

    Awesome Haiku :) :D.
    Man you are an expert :D :).
    Hats off :).

    Ps. I have a small award for you :D :). http://sweetsomethingz.blogspot.in/2012/04/awesomeness-personified.html

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    1. CYNOSUREApril 14, 2012 at 2:11 AM

      thanku so much Poo...but still I've not forgotten that who put me into this...thanks a lot Poo... :)
      thanks for the award...I'll catch you for it at your page... :)

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  11. GraceApril 13, 2012 at 5:52 PM

    Nice take on cycle of life ~

    http://everydayamazin.blogspot.ca/2012/04/haibun-empty.html

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  12. Preeti S.April 13, 2012 at 7:18 PM

    Superb. Keep it up.

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  13. PattiKenApril 13, 2012 at 8:24 PM

    And such is the cycle of life.

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  14. Sri ValliApril 13, 2012 at 9:07 PM

    Thoughtful one!....Beautifully penned :)

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  15. Tarun MazumdarApril 13, 2012 at 11:03 PM

    the cycle of birth and death... nice haiku man...

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  16. Sanjana April 14, 2012 at 1:48 AM

    beautifully done:)

    my take: http://njn-sorceress.blogspot.in/

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  17. magiceyeApril 14, 2012 at 6:27 AM

    nice... though the phrase 'get laid' invokes mixed reactions :)

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  18. Elvira Lobo(Elli)April 14, 2012 at 12:55 PM

    your are super incredible with haikus:)

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