When the mind sways, And when the same feelings this heart portrays, And when pot is also not left with enough ink, so when the quill says, Words on the parchment feel like a cheap fabric that frays. So many lines fumbled, So many feelings got crumbled, Like someone feels when they get ghosted, Those letters, in the drawer, always remained unposted. PS: Most of my posts are late night musings. Either way, the letter posted or not, the things I write reach this online platform or not, it feels good to scribble down random words once in a while.
A very awareness spreading thought this haiku spreads...! Very nice Sarabjeet.. Cheers :)
ReplyDeleteaah!! you take peculiar and tough themes for your haiku!! and you do the job very well, always! loved it! :)
ReplyDeleteyes,.. all of nature is such!
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ReplyDeletei like that comparison the polar bear having fun and the poor moneky almost frozen..
Bikram's
...far fetched! Great...Sarabjeet!!
ReplyDeleteIt has a message and does total justice to the word white :)
ReplyDeleteA very nice haiku!
very true quoted, and the images are apt :) nice bro!!
ReplyDeleteVery true!....Good one :)
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ReplyDeletehmmm v true sarabjeet !
ReplyDelete:) good thinking
ReplyDeletewell done ... a great haiku with so deep message :)keep going :P :P ;)
ReplyDeletetrue !the same situation impacts people differently.
ReplyDeleteOne's definition of fun, can be some one else's definition of pain. Well said
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