White: A Haiku...!!! #2


Life in white. Maybe
game for one, but to others
it costs them their life.

Written for: Haiku-Heights(part of The April Heights Month)


Comments

  1. PranitaApril 18, 2012 at 9:53 AM

    A very awareness spreading thought this haiku spreads...! Very nice Sarabjeet.. Cheers :)

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  2. UnknownApril 18, 2012 at 11:08 AM

    aah!! you take peculiar and tough themes for your haiku!! and you do the job very well, always! loved it! :)

    yes,.. all of nature is such!

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  3. BikramApril 18, 2012 at 1:15 PM

    oooooooooooooooohhhh
    i like that comparison the polar bear having fun and the poor moneky almost frozen..

    Bikram's

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  4. AmitAagApril 18, 2012 at 2:38 PM

    ...far fetched! Great...Sarabjeet!!

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  5. AlcinaApril 18, 2012 at 3:44 PM

    It has a message and does total justice to the word white :)
    A very nice haiku!

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  6. Gautam S BrahmaApril 18, 2012 at 5:12 PM

    very true quoted, and the images are apt :) nice bro!!

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  7. Sri ValliApril 18, 2012 at 8:10 PM

    Very true!....Good one :)

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  8. Sri ValliApril 18, 2012 at 8:11 PM

    Just want to inform you....I'm getting malware alert when I'm visiting your blog.....And my antivirus is pointing to the signature url as threat..

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  9. UnknownApril 18, 2012 at 8:19 PM

    hmmm v true sarabjeet !

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  10. magiceyeApril 18, 2012 at 10:03 PM

    :) good thinking

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  11. SurbhiApril 18, 2012 at 11:28 PM

    well done ... a great haiku with so deep message :)keep going :P :P ;)

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  12. indu chhibberApril 19, 2012 at 8:55 PM

    true !the same situation impacts people differently.

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  13. Ashwini C NApril 20, 2012 at 8:29 AM

    One's definition of fun, can be some one else's definition of pain. Well said

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