When the mind sways, And when the same feelings this heart portrays, And when pot is also not left with enough ink, so when the quill says, Words on the parchment feel like a cheap fabric that frays. So many lines fumbled, So many feelings got crumbled, Like someone feels when they get ghosted, Those letters, in the drawer, always remained unposted. PS: Most of my posts are late night musings. Either way, the letter posted or not, the things I write reach this online platform or not, it feels good to scribble down random words once in a while.
this one of your best haiku and the one i liked most.!!
ReplyDeleteso true!!
great one, Sarabjeet! :)
Very very nice Sarabjeet...! You write the simple truth of life in a very beautiful manner! :)
ReplyDeleteGive me a prey or let me be the prey.. a prayer from ancient times.. Sarab..that's how it is.. you have beautifully crafted a great truth..
ReplyDeleteThe stark reality of life . Very well captured :-)
ReplyDeleteA fact of life, to be sure.
ReplyDeletevery creatively expressed ~ life ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^
ReplyDeleteIt's the cycle of life ~
ReplyDeleteThis question always make me restless, cycle of life and death, expression with perfect words.
ReplyDeleteWow..
ReplyDeleteA question asked so perfectly.
Wow..
Awesome one Sarabjit Ji :).
I have no answers :D :).
this was too good...so deep and thought provoking yet so true..never thought of it this way
ReplyDeleteindeed.... beautiful
ReplyDeleteSomeday, I suppose, I will become a meal for worms!
ReplyDelete“The Way Goes On”
“A Dozen Wonders”
Well done. The cycle of life ... in just a few words.
ReplyDeleteThis is very thoughtful one...beautifully penned
ReplyDeleteThe cycle of life is not always understandable to humans -- but nonetheless part of nature. Nicely done!! Day 17 ~~ Answers
ReplyDeletethat is such a precious wonder, many past and present civilizations are of the same mind .... nothing is wasted and everything is a gift, this is a great message you've shared!
ReplyDeletei like the second one...nice haiku! thanks for sharing...
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