The Blast Aftermath - 55 Fiction




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"Past seven years, it was routine for her. She waited for him. But today he was late. This had never happened before, his phone was unreachable. Her heart started pounding. She didn't want the bad news. But the phone rang, and she knew, he’s also one of them.

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He’s also one of the BLAST VICTIMS"


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PS: An attempt to a new writing style: 55 fiction



Comments

  1. A nice 55 fiction. But styles aside I would like you to write a long one, maybe we can call it Fiction - 555 :)

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    1. Will definitely try to come-up with something...thanks Mr. Sharma... :)

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  2. Less words but powerful message conveyed - something I could relate with...Good one!

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  3. That's sad...
    Nice attempt on F:55 :)

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    1. very sad...tough to relate it with the life of those who have faced it...thanks Simran... :)

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  4. Good attempt at 55fiction. This is my first visit to your blog, have you also tried flash fiction?
    Bhavya
    Just Another Blog

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  5. Oh! So sad but you write 55 wonderfully :)

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  6. I second with Saru here.You nailed the 55.

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  7. That is one devastating news I never want to hear. You have beautifully brought it out bro.

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  8. The pain of waiting for someone and in having to accept that they won't be back. Really painful.

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