My daddy wakes me up at six in the morning, And says, "Wake up, it's time to go to school." My mommy helps me put my uniform, It make me look so cool. Shoes, yes. Tie, yes. Daddy and mommy said, "God bless". Before I forget, ID Card. Yeaassss. Mommy packed my lunch. Yumm... Yumm... Yumm... Going to school is merry. Because I sing with my friends, "Humm... Humm... Humm..." Ooppss, the bus has come, So I ran in a hurry. Driver uncle said, "I'll wait, Please don't worry." I board my bus at seven, Off it goes.. zooooom. We do our assembly, And then go to classroom. I love doing drawing, Ms. Lily is my favorite teacher. Friendly and always smiling, She calls me "Naughty little creature". We eat our lunch, And play in the afternoon. Sometimes I play hide and seek, Sometimes I play with balloons. We then study math, Two candy and two candy, makes it four. Then we study science, I love how tiger roar. Oooowww, it's time to go h
A nice 55 fiction. But styles aside I would like you to write a long one, maybe we can call it Fiction - 555 :)
ReplyDeleteWill definitely try to come-up with something...thanks Mr. Sharma... :)
DeleteLess words but powerful message conveyed - something I could relate with...Good one!
ReplyDeletethanks dear... :)
DeleteThat's sad...
ReplyDeleteNice attempt on F:55 :)
very sad...tough to relate it with the life of those who have faced it...thanks Simran... :)
Deletenice read!..:)
ReplyDeletethanks Sahi... :)
DeleteGood attempt at 55fiction. This is my first visit to your blog, have you also tried flash fiction?
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thanks Bhav...
DeleteNo...not yet... ;)
Nice one
ReplyDeletethanks magiceye... :)
DeleteNice fiction. Like it
ReplyDeleteThanks Easwar... :)
DeleteOh! So sad but you write 55 wonderfully :)
ReplyDeletethanku so much Saru
DeleteI second with Saru here.You nailed the 55.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad...thanks a lot dear... :)
DeleteThat is one devastating news I never want to hear. You have beautifully brought it out bro.
ReplyDeleteNo one would...thanks buddy...
DeleteAhh!! That's heartbreaking!
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