Spring: A Haiku...!!!


New Generation,
Biding Goodbye to Shivers,
Greets the pleasant Spring...!!!

Written for: HAIKU HEIGHTS.

PS: My first attempt at Haiku...Critic Reviews are invited... :O

Comments

  1. Deepak KarthikFebruary 28, 2012 at 11:39 PM

    awesome :)
    HAIKU HI FI....

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  2. Anukriti SharmaFebruary 28, 2012 at 11:40 PM

    Nice picture to go with a nicely written Haiku

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  3. KajalFebruary 28, 2012 at 11:44 PM

    Haiku is not easy...glad to see you first one so apt. Looking forward to more..
    cheers.

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  4. Vinay Leo R.February 28, 2012 at 11:44 PM

    Regards the haiku, nothing much to say :) It's a beautiful one. A pleasant spring's tale.

    its "bidding goodbye" rather than "biding good-bye" I feel.

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    1. CYNOSUREFebruary 28, 2012 at 11:58 PM

      Thanks Leo...
      correction made... :)

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    2. Vinay Leo R.March 1, 2012 at 10:50 PM

      Sarab, this isn't an "attempt" my friend. This is a proper haiku itself. :)

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    3. CYNOSUREMarch 2, 2012 at 5:06 PM

      Thanku so much Leo... :)

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  5. UnknownFebruary 28, 2012 at 11:49 PM

    Nice attempt at Haiku Sarab:)

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  6. RajFebruary 29, 2012 at 5:08 AM

    Such a cute Haiku. Beautifully written. :)

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  7. deepFebruary 29, 2012 at 9:52 AM

    Nice attempt.. Keep going :)

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  8. MalinyFebruary 29, 2012 at 12:09 PM

    good one . . keep writing :)
    cheers
    maliny

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  9. DellaFebruary 29, 2012 at 12:13 PM

    ahh.. a haiku for spring.. lovely!

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  11. RoyalNirupamFebruary 29, 2012 at 9:47 PM

    Wow! exceptional

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  12. BikramFebruary 29, 2012 at 9:54 PM

    so looking forward to spring here ..
    and thats a good haiku

    Bikram's

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  13. abhinavrFebruary 29, 2012 at 10:53 PM

    Beautiful Haiku ! Welcoming the spring.....
    And, that picture is also cute :) :)

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  14. SimranFebruary 29, 2012 at 10:57 PM

    Hi CYNOSURE,

    Here's a lovely attempt by you :)
    So refreshing your words..

    Keep Expressing & Sharing ~

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  15. Santosh NambyMarch 1, 2012 at 1:14 PM

    beautifully written....

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  16. Princess PooMarch 1, 2012 at 3:22 PM

    Beautiful Picture and a Beautiful Haiku :).
    A fantastic attempt Cynosure jhi :).
    Too good.
    I loved it :) :D.

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    1. CYNOSUREMarch 1, 2012 at 9:11 PM

      thanku a lot Princess...
      actually after seeing your post only I planned to make an attempt for Haiku... :P
      Thanks for inspiring me... :)

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    2. Princess PooMarch 2, 2012 at 1:57 PM

      Oh wow. I inspired someone :O.
      *heart attack* :D
      So good to know jhi :).

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    3. CYNOSUREMarch 2, 2012 at 5:11 PM

      hahaha..."heart attacks"... :P
      inspiration can come at any time...nobody knows... :P

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  17. Akshay Kumar GMarch 1, 2012 at 6:06 PM

    Good start. Keep it up buddy :)

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  18. Jen..The Butterfly EffectMarch 1, 2012 at 8:50 PM

    Haiku is not so easy and you've come up with it so well and aesthetically with an equally gorgeous photo!! :) Good attempt Cynosure!! :)

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  19. KittyMarch 2, 2012 at 7:25 PM

    Cute n lovely picture decorated by beautiful words...nice haiku! :)

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  20. Magical Mystical TeacherMarch 2, 2012 at 9:07 PM

    Still waiting for shivers to end here in the Desert Southwest, USA!



    Waiting for Springtime

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    1. CYNOSUREMarch 3, 2012 at 2:11 PM

      hmmm...hope your waiting period ends soon... :) :)

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