Blue: A Haiku...!!!


with blue sky stamping
evil night, another new
ray shines in the sky.

written for: Haiku Heights

PS: Every night is followed by a beautiful day...only thing that matters is how long the night will be...??? :O

Comments

  1. Superb!
    A great thought ... shine of hope :)

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  2. Hey it also looks like a boat in a sea

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    1. nice perception Anu...its always good to see someone coming up with something out of the box... ;)

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  3. Nights are always of the same length.. we find them longer only when we are sleepless !!!

    btw nice Haiku...

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    1. Thanku... :)
      waise Nights are longer in winters... :P :P :P

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    2. >.< I thought of writing "almost" in the first place, but then skipped, taking it as obvious.. you are impossible :/

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    3. hahahaha...Nothing is Impossible... :P :P :P

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  4. MR.Haiku alias Mathematician :)
    you are becoming a pro in Haiku
    Keep going.

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  5. Very optimistic and heart warming! Keep it up bro!

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  6. True, true P.S.....you have a thing about post scripts...I have noticed :-)

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  7. Wow!! grt post, first time on ur blog:)Happy to join ur blog:))

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  8. an optimistic look at dawn, nice :)

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  9. While this speaks to me because I'm a morning person, I wonder what it would say to someone who is, as Robert Frost writes in one of poems, "acquainted with the night"? :)

    Shadowy Blue Haiku

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    1. haha...nice one...actually I'm an engineer and I'm acquainted to the night only but then also I guess to be on the productive side we have to obviously use some of those resources which only day time can provide...we'll incomplete without it...that's why morning time can' be ignored... :)

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  10. I like the way you wrote the second line. Good one...:)

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  11. Wow jhi :D :).
    This is awesome :).

    You have become an expert already ;) :D.
    Too good jhi :D.
    Just LOVE coming here :).
    Place is filled with awesome-ness :D

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    1. Thanku poo for inspiring me everytime with your visit... :)

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  12. Good one. there's something special about the line "evil night, another new". that's the best part of this haiku.

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  13. New light ! New hope each and every day! wow :)

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  14. you are getting real real good:)

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  15. Hats off to the thought! Very beautiful!

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