Blue: A Haiku...!!!


with blue sky stamping
evil night, another new
ray shines in the sky.

written for: Haiku Heights

PS: Every night is followed by a beautiful day...only thing that matters is how long the night will be...??? :O

Comments

  1. SimranMarch 19, 2012 at 8:03 PM

    Superb!
    A great thought ... shine of hope :)

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  2. SurbhiMarch 19, 2012 at 8:33 PM

    nice :)

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  3. Mohini PuranikMarch 19, 2012 at 9:43 PM

    Very inspiring...:)

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  4. BikramMarch 19, 2012 at 10:27 PM

    A new day a new beginning


    Bikram's

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  5. AnonymousMarch 20, 2012 at 12:29 AM

    Hey it also looks like a boat in a sea

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    1. CYNOSUREMarch 20, 2012 at 12:56 AM

      nice perception Anu...its always good to see someone coming up with something out of the box... ;)

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  6. abhinavrMarch 20, 2012 at 9:31 AM

    Beautiful and inspiring . .

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  7. vinayMarch 20, 2012 at 10:50 AM

    Good one..
    Quite inspiring. :)

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  8. magiceyeMarch 20, 2012 at 11:10 AM

    lovely!

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  9. Akshay Kumar GMarch 20, 2012 at 12:56 PM

    Another good one bro :)

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  10. deepMarch 20, 2012 at 2:13 PM

    Nights are always of the same length.. we find them longer only when we are sleepless !!!

    btw nice Haiku...

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    1. CYNOSUREMarch 20, 2012 at 9:05 PM

      Thanku... :)
      waise Nights are longer in winters... :P :P :P

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    2. deepMarch 21, 2012 at 2:36 PM

      >.< I thought of writing "almost" in the first place, but then skipped, taking it as obvious.. you are impossible :/

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    3. CYNOSUREMarch 21, 2012 at 11:41 PM

      hahahaha...Nothing is Impossible... :P :P :P

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  11. Deepak KarthikMarch 20, 2012 at 3:49 PM

    MR.Haiku alias Mathematician :)
    you are becoming a pro in Haiku
    Keep going.

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  12. AmitAagMarch 20, 2012 at 4:42 PM

    Very optimistic and heart warming! Keep it up bro!

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  13. KitchenKarmaMarch 20, 2012 at 6:52 PM

    True, true P.S.....you have a thing about post scripts...I have noticed :-)

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  14. spicenflavorsMarch 20, 2012 at 9:27 PM

    Wow!! grt post, first time on ur blog:)Happy to join ur blog:))

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  15. Harish G.March 21, 2012 at 2:29 AM

    an optimistic look at dawn, nice :)

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  16. zephyrMarch 21, 2012 at 2:40 AM

    lovely!

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  17. Magical Mystical TeacherMarch 21, 2012 at 6:39 AM

    While this speaks to me because I'm a morning person, I wonder what it would say to someone who is, as Robert Frost writes in one of poems, "acquainted with the night"? :)

    Shadowy Blue Haiku

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    1. CYNOSUREMarch 21, 2012 at 11:50 PM

      haha...nice one...actually I'm an engineer and I'm acquainted to the night only but then also I guess to be on the productive side we have to obviously use some of those resources which only day time can provide...we'll incomplete without it...that's why morning time can' be ignored... :)

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  18. Saru SinghalMarch 21, 2012 at 7:45 AM

    I like the way you wrote the second line. Good one...:)

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  19. Princess PooMarch 21, 2012 at 2:26 PM

    Wow jhi :D :).
    This is awesome :).

    You have become an expert already ;) :D.
    Too good jhi :D.
    Just LOVE coming here :).
    Place is filled with awesome-ness :D

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    1. CYNOSUREMarch 21, 2012 at 11:52 PM

      Thanku poo for inspiring me everytime with your visit... :)

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  20. LeoPawMarch 21, 2012 at 6:56 PM

    Good one. there's something special about the line "evil night, another new". that's the best part of this haiku.

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  21. Jen..The Butterfly EffectMarch 21, 2012 at 7:40 PM

    New light ! New hope each and every day! wow :)

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  22. KajalMarch 22, 2012 at 1:15 AM

    you are getting real real good:)

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  23. PranitaMarch 22, 2012 at 8:31 AM

    Hats off to the thought! Very beautiful!

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  24. V. KhawaniMarch 23, 2012 at 6:04 PM

    Beautiful !

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  25. CYNOSUREMarch 24, 2012 at 11:37 PM

    lol...thanks Ashwini... :)

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