Endurance: A Haiku...!!!


clouds may be dark, shine
never fades; longer is the
rain, nitid is its grace.

Written for: Haiku-Heights
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PS: Longer the bad times are, the more we get accustomed of withstanding hardships...and when it ends, we're the one who'll be shining... :)

PS: But the questions is...Will we be able to survive all the hardships and emerge as shining sun at the end...because hard times sometimes appears to be everlasting...(although they are meant to end)???


Comments

  1. Haiku is my new muse... i gotta learn the rules of it!

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  2. "and when it ends, we're the one who'll be shining.." Oh, I can't wait to shine! ;)
    And YES we will survive! Be positive and we can easily overcome everything..
    Thanks for visiting!
    XOXO

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    1. rightly said...you're welcome Fida...GOD bless u... :)

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  3. I like the idea that there is light behind the darkest clouds.

    Poppies Lack Endurance

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  4. Lovely haiku...let us hope that we can withstand all adversity. I like the questions you pose here!

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  5. Awesome...
    However long may the dark times be but sooner or later, one can emerge out as a shining sun provided he is determined to endure the hardships and keep fighting. :)

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  6. yes .. they ARE meant to end !!!you just need to withstand..
    Remember the scene from Shawshank Redemption.. when Andy is finally out, drenched in rain..with nitid look on his face... if not just watch that part again !! longer is the dark time, more is the shine in the morning.

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    1. haha...Thanks sis...nice example...I remember the scene... :)

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  7. Perfect description because grace is sure and steadfast...

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  8. wah wah,,, Love this too..:)

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  9. so true...loved it.... so very true...
    endurance is but a test of persistence,patient,faith,hope and love.

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  10. So beautifully expressed and is so thoughtful! :)
    You are going great with each of your haiku... Keep writing :)

    Hardship seems to be never ending but actually they are not!
    As you mentioned -clouds may be dark, shine
    never fades

    Though the way is dark in delusion at times but we have to manage to keep the gleam of self believe within so that it may lite up even the ever dark pathways ....
    Never stop believing in yourself!
    And the grace is how we overcome ! :)

    Liked your thought over using two colors determining the two scenes together.

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    1. Thanku so much Simran...I like it that you liked it... :)
      and I'm always amazed that how come at so young age you can sometimes think of something which we're not able to think till now... :O

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  11. when situations scratch u, consider urself as a sandpaper, and in the end u'll definitely shine ;) very well cyno :)

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  12. THANK you for the conversion.. man i am so bad at haiku's

    this is a beautiful one indeed we will shine after all those hardships that we face with hard work..

    Bikram's

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    1. HAHAHA...u r welcome Bikram... :)
      thanks a lot... :)

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  13. This is my first visit here.. I've to say, "Your Haiku is a cynosure treat for my eyes".. Thanks for blessing this.. From now on following you as well..

    Someone is Special

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    1. Thanku so much Saravana...I'm really glad to have you as a friend... :)

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  14. Your words are so true. If we can endure all things we will win in the end. Strong Haiku. Thank you.

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  15. Amazingly said friend :)

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  16. Great !do you know who you think like ? none less than Ghalib-" Mushkilen mujh par padi itni ,ke aasan ho gayin."

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    1. I really surprised to see that someone is comparing me to such a great personality...I believe that's the best compliment I've ever received...Thanku so much Indu... :)

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  17. superb deep invigorating thoughts

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  18. Another lovely present from the Haiku king:)

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  19. Wonderfully composed, accompanied with the wonderful picture it makes a nice haiga.

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