Fate: A Haiku...!!!


Blaming our fate, for
Destiny reached, we ignore
Our deeds, who framed it.

Written for: Haiku-Heights

Comments

  1. fate and destiny
    cant be planned,so
    live life with flow

    cheers

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  2. Very well written Sarabjeet!

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  3. Wow!
    Amazing the way you framed this fact with perfect words :)

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  4. Sarabjeet.. your Haiku is getting better and better . Love this one. Very crisp:)

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  5. Yes, you are getting better..this is really good!

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  6. You are rocking with Haiku :)
    well done bro.

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  7. WOWO.. AWESOME and what a true statement .. blaming fate for the destiny when we forget what we have done

    Bikram's

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  8. That was really profound. Brilliant one.

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  9. haikus are so tough to word
    this is a good one

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  10. Whoa! Deep... lovely... and intense!
    All in three sentences... amazing!

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  11. Good one. Haikus are tough, and you seem to be mastering it day by day.

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  12. well said... and well framed !

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  13. Another set of amazing lines from the Haiku King :)

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  14. Sarabjit - very beautifully said !!

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  15. good one..enjoyed reading. thanks for sharing.

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  16. Wow. Just wow.
    Couldn't be more perfect :).
    So beautiful Cynosure jhi :).

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    1. Its always good to get complimented from the person from you got inspired... :P

      Thanku so much... :)

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  17. True words...
    fate and destiny ever so entwined,
    in a porcelain future we designed

    -ur latest follower

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    1. Thanks Autopublie...Nice to see u here... :)

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  18. I love this one! Very meaningful!!
    Keep going on like this! B)

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  19. True. both fate and destiny, it depends on us.

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