Clarity: A Haiku...!!!




Life: An unbiased
reflecting mirror of all
our good and bad deeds.

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We create our own
future; a lucid and well
ignored fact of life


Written for: Haiku-Heights(part of The April Heights Month)



Comments

  1. PranitaApril 28, 2012 at 12:26 AM

    Beyoooooooooooootiful Haiku... I lovvvvd it!!! Terrific!!! I can't decide which i liked better! Well done Sarbjeet... :)
    Shower of rejuvenation - A Haiku

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  2. Ramesh SoodApril 28, 2012 at 12:48 AM

    Very wise from a young mind like yours...keep on the good work sarab..

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  3. Yellow TulipApril 28, 2012 at 1:56 AM

    Loved the concept with complementing pic...

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  4. ElleceeApril 28, 2012 at 2:43 AM

    Enjoyed your haiku and they both portray some true facts of life. Thank you.

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  5. carol l mckennaApril 28, 2012 at 2:59 AM

    Such wisdom and photo so appropriate ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  6. GraceApril 28, 2012 at 3:55 AM

    I like that mirror...very nice set ~

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  7. Sri ValliApril 28, 2012 at 11:54 AM

    Beautiful set!
    Yes, it's true that we ignore some known powerful facts of life! and take them for granted!
    Fuddling thoughts

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  8. Adura OjoApril 28, 2012 at 3:17 PM

    Well penned...the ideas as expressed and the images. I particularly like the second haiku.

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  9. Jaideep RaoApril 28, 2012 at 5:17 PM

    "We create our own
    future".. Very true!

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  10. SimranApril 28, 2012 at 10:00 PM

    Well said and written :)

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  11. ChèvrefeuilleApril 28, 2012 at 11:27 PM

    Nice written.

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  12. Magical Mystical TeacherApril 29, 2012 at 12:40 AM

    Oh, yes, in the mirror of life, it's ALL there!

    Seeking Clarity—and Shadows

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