When the mind sways, And when the same feelings this heart portrays, And when pot is also not left with enough ink, so when the quill says, Words on the parchment feel like a cheap fabric that frays. So many lines fumbled, So many feelings got crumbled, Like someone feels when they get ghosted, Those letters, in the drawer, always remained unposted. PS: Most of my posts are late night musings. Either way, the letter posted or not, the things I write reach this online platform or not, it feels good to scribble down random words once in a while.
So meaningful only in 3 lines, with least words. I couldn't think, mesmerize with this angle too.
ReplyDeleteThat was the one sad incident that took place,americans learnt their lessons, and we are yet to..
ReplyDeleteYou have thought it well.. a different angle here..lessons to remember..
ReplyDeleteI loved the contrast here. mesmerize i used to connect to something wonderful and facinating..ya i stood hypnotized too,,,
ReplyDeleteOut of the box rendition of this prompt... very true... the incident always hovers a sense of darkness inside!
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ReplyDeleteLovely!
ReplyDeleteNo religion encourages violence!...Its just people have gone mad...
Sweet escape
Wow!
ReplyDeleteAgain you are with something so different ! :)
2 see tons of steel concrete being razed down is indeed mesmerizing albeit a gruesome one, hw can God ask sumone to seek revenge on his behalf...Al-Qaeda is indeed an institution of madmen.....
ReplyDeleteAs far as d Haiku is concerned wat can i say..three powerful lines.. :)
awesome haiku ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^
ReplyDeleteany war that kills innocent people , and is targetted towards innocent HOW CAN THAT BE JIHAAAD...
ReplyDeletein the attack more outsiders died then americans itself ...
Bikram's
Jihaad? Killing in the name of God?
ReplyDeleteI think most of us here would call it a cowardly act of murder. The word I would use to describe how I felt as those towers came down, bringing our way of life down with them, is stunned. I was stunned with horror.
I think the whole world was mesmerised...
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