My daddy wakes me up at six in the morning, And says, "Wake up, it's time to go to school." My mommy helps me put my uniform, It make me look so cool. Shoes, yes. Tie, yes. Daddy and mommy said, "God bless". Before I forget, ID Card. Yeaassss. Mommy packed my lunch. Yumm... Yumm... Yumm... Going to school is merry. Because I sing with my friends, "Humm... Humm... Humm..." Ooppss, the bus has come, So I ran in a hurry. Driver uncle said, "I'll wait, Please don't worry." I board my bus at seven, Off it goes.. zooooom. We do our assembly, And then go to classroom. I love doing drawing, Ms. Lily is my favorite teacher. Friendly and always smiling, She calls me "Naughty little creature". We eat our lunch, And play in the afternoon. Sometimes I play hide and seek, Sometimes I play with balloons. We then study math, Two candy and two candy, makes it four. Then we study science, I love how tiger roar. Oooowww, it's time to go h
So meaningful only in 3 lines, with least words. I couldn't think, mesmerize with this angle too.
ReplyDeleteThat was the one sad incident that took place,americans learnt their lessons, and we are yet to..
ReplyDeleteYou have thought it well.. a different angle here..lessons to remember..
ReplyDeleteI loved the contrast here. mesmerize i used to connect to something wonderful and facinating..ya i stood hypnotized too,,,
ReplyDeleteOut of the box rendition of this prompt... very true... the incident always hovers a sense of darkness inside!
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ReplyDeleteLovely!
ReplyDeleteNo religion encourages violence!...Its just people have gone mad...
Sweet escape
Wow!
ReplyDeleteAgain you are with something so different ! :)
2 see tons of steel concrete being razed down is indeed mesmerizing albeit a gruesome one, hw can God ask sumone to seek revenge on his behalf...Al-Qaeda is indeed an institution of madmen.....
ReplyDeleteAs far as d Haiku is concerned wat can i say..three powerful lines.. :)
awesome haiku ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^
ReplyDeleteany war that kills innocent people , and is targetted towards innocent HOW CAN THAT BE JIHAAAD...
ReplyDeletein the attack more outsiders died then americans itself ...
Bikram's
Jihaad? Killing in the name of God?
ReplyDeleteI think most of us here would call it a cowardly act of murder. The word I would use to describe how I felt as those towers came down, bringing our way of life down with them, is stunned. I was stunned with horror.
I think the whole world was mesmerised...
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