Still: A Haiku...!!!

Me and my sister

stills from past
says a lot; still they
never speak

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still your mind;
your universe will
rhyme with you


Written for: Haiku-Heights(part of The April Heights Month)

PS: The first one was completed by a spontaneous line from my friend Vivek Kumar Singh... :)

PS: Just try to recognize the strength of your mind and your self...the whole world lies within... :)

Comments

  1. I read the first haiku atleast thrice!, soo good!

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  2. Second one..wow!! Have you arrived?

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  3. Absolutely beautiful...! The first one tender and the second totally out of the world! Absolutely amazing Sarabjeet :)

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  4. Whole world lies within and they tell still don't speak..lovely..:) and true.

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  5. Gawd...how are you able to create such beautiful lines?

    Amazing Haiku Sarab..
    God bless
    :)

    P.S:I gave you the Lovely Blog Award..Please acknowledge :)
    http://relationshipvows.blogspot.in/2012/04/one-lovely-blog-award.html

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  6. your universe will rhyme with you -----mmmmm


    three still haiku and-senryu

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  7. enlightened haiku ~ excellent ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  8. Love the hope that the universe will rhyme with you in the stillness of a moment!

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  9. Not sure if I have discovered the truth of the second haiku set in real life.

    Great thoughts!

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  10. Stills don't speak - and neither do some sisters! A nice set.

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  11. What a beautiful composition ..
    Aww :)
    Just loved that cute pic <3 <3

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  12. And wow! You crossed 100 followers!
    Congratulations :-)

    Wish you happy blogging ..keep writing and sharing! :)

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  13. wow...both are beautiful....:)

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  14. The second one is my favourite!!!Thanks!!!

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  15. Awesome! I love the second one the most. That one is very spiritual too.

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  16. When we are at peace - everything flows as it should! Day 22 ~~ Moonlit Windows

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  17. To be honest, being still is the hardest thing in the world for me to do!

    “Shadowed Is My Way…and Still”

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  18. A beautiful haiku with a very cute pic !!

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  19. A beautiful photo to go with a beautiful haiku! Deep di and you look so serene, asleep!

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