Am I the sun, or Am I the moon? Well, I'm a celestial body in a vast lonely sky, You may call it a bane or a boon.
I've got two faces, But they're one. None of them as bad as yours', that you Tell to stay away from, to your daughter and son.
I don't hate it, that One of them has always been a dark one. At least, it has always been there for me, My forever companion.
Loyal, as it's always Present in my bad times. Reliable, 'coz It won't judge me even in my worst crimes.
Every evening, I see you sitting on the benches, When I look down from the sky. Some smiles look so genuine and fresh, While few smiles come out as a bit wry.
Some are trying to please others, Some are struggling with the experiences they've sorrowed. Some are trying to make relationships work, Some are buying happiness with the money they've borrowed.
Crippled, That's how you people feel. Like handicapped you behave, Just because in life someone acted like a heel?
Stop depending on others, Stop being a c…
yes they do, they so do... nicely done there...
ReplyDeleteVery true...! Good or bad... the repercussions can not be avoided!
ReplyDeleteSuperb!!!
ReplyDeleteReally true...
Good composition dost!
ReplyDeleteSo true... And the picture completes the thought. Lovely haiku.
ReplyDeleteVERY TRUE SARAB !
ReplyDeleteTrue, really temptations make us weak and then we have to regret too..
ReplyDeletetrue..beautiful creation :)
ReplyDeletehumans are after all the salve of emotions and that is why they give into tempatation
keep writing
God bless
Yaa Soo true... scars tat make us choose better today only to realise we just fell for another temptation which would leave another scar!...
ReplyDeleteSo true ~ well crafted ~ thanks, namaste ^_^
ReplyDeleteThis is so true. Well done haiku.
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely message...its so true ~
ReplyDeleteDeep! Great message to share.
ReplyDeleteI also love the way you punctuated for creative effect. Thank you for your kind words on my post.
ReplyDeleteMuch appreciated.
I really like this. It's very thought-provoking.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful lines saying bitter truth..
ReplyDeleteNice commentary on the consequences of temptation.
ReplyDeleteRichard
Lovely haiku with nice moral :)
ReplyDeleteEverything and every one we encounter provide us lessons, and help shape who we are ... nicely done. Happy Friday ~~
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Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteWelcome to life, with temptations, scars and all!
ReplyDeleteSniffing Temptation
Yes but if we look at those scars then they should remind us not to do anything stupid again .. we should learn from those scars
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