When the mind sways, And when the same feelings this heart portrays, And when pot is also not left with enough ink, so when the quill says, Words on the parchment feel like a cheap fabric that frays. So many lines fumbled, So many feelings got crumbled, Like someone feels when they get ghosted, Those letters, in the drawer, always remained unposted. PS: Most of my posts are late night musings. Either way, the letter posted or not, the things I write reach this online platform or not, it feels good to scribble down random words once in a while.
yes they do, they so do... nicely done there...
ReplyDeleteVery true...! Good or bad... the repercussions can not be avoided!
ReplyDeleteSuperb!!!
ReplyDeleteReally true...
Good composition dost!
ReplyDeleteSo true... And the picture completes the thought. Lovely haiku.
ReplyDeleteVERY TRUE SARAB !
ReplyDeleteTrue, really temptations make us weak and then we have to regret too..
ReplyDeletetrue..beautiful creation :)
ReplyDeletehumans are after all the salve of emotions and that is why they give into tempatation
keep writing
God bless
Yaa Soo true... scars tat make us choose better today only to realise we just fell for another temptation which would leave another scar!...
ReplyDeleteSo true ~ well crafted ~ thanks, namaste ^_^
ReplyDeleteThis is so true. Well done haiku.
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely message...its so true ~
ReplyDeleteDeep! Great message to share.
ReplyDeleteI also love the way you punctuated for creative effect. Thank you for your kind words on my post.
ReplyDeleteMuch appreciated.
I really like this. It's very thought-provoking.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful lines saying bitter truth..
ReplyDeleteNice commentary on the consequences of temptation.
ReplyDeleteRichard
Lovely haiku with nice moral :)
ReplyDeleteEverything and every one we encounter provide us lessons, and help shape who we are ... nicely done. Happy Friday ~~
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Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteWelcome to life, with temptations, scars and all!
ReplyDeleteSniffing Temptation
Yes but if we look at those scars then they should remind us not to do anything stupid again .. we should learn from those scars
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