Temptation: A Haiku...!!!


tempted once;
they leave scars; rather
permanent

Written for: Haiku-Heights(part of The April Heights Month)

PS: Normally we get attracted towards wrong acts...but every action leaves a permanent mark on our life...

Comments

  1. yes they do, they so do... nicely done there...

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  2. Very true...! Good or bad... the repercussions can not be avoided!

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  3. So true... And the picture completes the thought. Lovely haiku.

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  4. True, really temptations make us weak and then we have to regret too..

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  5. true..beautiful creation :)
    humans are after all the salve of emotions and that is why they give into tempatation
    keep writing
    God bless

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  6. Yaa Soo true... scars tat make us choose better today only to realise we just fell for another temptation which would leave another scar!...

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  7. So true ~ well crafted ~ thanks, namaste ^_^

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  8. This is so true. Well done haiku.

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  9. What a lovely message...its so true ~

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  10. I also love the way you punctuated for creative effect. Thank you for your kind words on my post.
    Much appreciated.

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  11. I really like this. It's very thought-provoking.

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  12. Beautiful lines saying bitter truth..

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  13. Nice commentary on the consequences of temptation.

    Richard

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  14. Everything and every one we encounter provide us lessons, and help shape who we are ... nicely done. Happy Friday ~~
    Day 27 ~~ My Diet's Expiration

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  15. Yes but if we look at those scars then they should remind us not to do anything stupid again .. we should learn from those scars


    Bikram's

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