Renovation: A Haiku...!!!



beads can be put back
on string, but will they ever be
able to cross the knot?

Written for: Haiku-Heights(part of The April Heights Month)

PS: Houses can be rebuild or renovated, but not the relations...Never try to play with them because if broken/damaged once, they will never be the same as before...

Comments

  1. Mohini PuranikApril 20, 2012 at 12:03 AM

    So true..really.

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  2. PattiKenApril 20, 2012 at 12:06 AM

    This speaks such truth. Sometimes the repair can't undo the damage done.

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  3. Ramesh SoodApril 20, 2012 at 12:09 AM

    Sarab.. a good thought here..can we choose the beads..based on the size of the knots..? I wonder..

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  4. GraceApril 20, 2012 at 3:53 AM

    Some repairs can't undo the damage ~

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  5. ElleceeApril 20, 2012 at 5:45 AM

    I feel that what you are saying here is true. Some things are never the same after parts are broken and mended. Well done haiku. thank you.

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  6. carol l mckennaApril 20, 2012 at 6:17 AM

    Contemplate haiku ~ wonderful ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  7. PranitaApril 20, 2012 at 10:57 AM

    Awesome... u explained such a beautiful msg in such simple words! Loved it...

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  8. Jaideep RaoApril 20, 2012 at 11:23 AM

    wow!, Respects!

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  9. Fida BosuApril 20, 2012 at 1:41 PM

    True.. once it's broken, it will never be the same anymore ;)

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  10. SwetaApril 20, 2012 at 3:40 PM

    Very thoughtful and great observation :-)

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  11. ChèvrefeuilleApril 20, 2012 at 4:51 PM

    Awesome! Nice haiku with a deeper meaning. I love reading your everyday haiku for this Haiku Heights Challenge. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts with us.

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  12. Sri ValliApril 20, 2012 at 11:08 PM

    Thoughtful and creative one.....Ana the picture is amazing!

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  13. AnonymousApril 21, 2012 at 7:58 AM

    This reminds me of the idea of a broken plate can be glued back together, but it's never the same! Thank you for sharing! Day 20 ~~ Renovations

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  14. PunamApril 21, 2012 at 8:56 PM

    I love the message. It's very true. Relations should always be handled with lots of care. The knots will never melt away. The sketch is amazing. Each pearl is beautifully crafted down to the minutest detail (shadow).. Have you done it?

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  15. SimranApril 22, 2012 at 1:02 PM

    Well said :-)

    You have become my fav. :-)

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