Coherent: A Haiku...!!!


coherent, focused;
wings stretched, it takes-off with its
delicious reward

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Consistent, focused,
and concentrated; reward
will surely be yours... :)

Written for: Haiku-Heights(part of The April Heights Month)



Comments

  1. Sankara Jayanth SApril 12, 2012 at 12:02 AM

    nice metaphorical haiku set... loved them,Sarab..
    :)

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  2. SurbhiApril 12, 2012 at 12:08 AM

    Nice 1 sarab ... very inspiring :)

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  3. Ramesh SoodApril 12, 2012 at 12:21 AM

    Good thoughts Sarab..but have you deliberately missed on syllables..that I would comment.. well, I do.. :)

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    1. CYNOSUREApril 13, 2012 at 1:14 AM

      well, actually I did that intentionally... :D :D :D

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  4. PranitaApril 12, 2012 at 12:31 AM

    Hey... Ur set and my take on this prompt sound somewhat similar.. like same msg, diff words! :)
    Lovely set...

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    1. CYNOSUREApril 13, 2012 at 1:15 AM

      yeaahhh...I saw yours...they are surprisingly similar... :)

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  5. PattiKenApril 12, 2012 at 2:10 AM

    Good one. And an amazing photo.

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  6. GraceApril 12, 2012 at 4:03 AM

    I agree with you ~ The picture inspired me:

    wings rising
    focused eyes on sky,
    flight reward

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  7. Gemma WisemanApril 12, 2012 at 4:12 AM

    Keeping the eyes on a prize (and wanting it) is a great way to ensure claiming it! Lovely!

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  8. Fida BosuApril 12, 2012 at 6:13 AM

    Truly inspiring!

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    1. CYNOSUREApril 13, 2012 at 1:17 AM

      thanku so much Fida...thanks for being here every time... :)

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  9. smiling soulApril 12, 2012 at 12:04 PM

    nice! :)

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  10. HarshaApril 12, 2012 at 3:51 PM

    Beautiful and truly inspiring :)

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  11. Sri ValliApril 12, 2012 at 7:06 PM

    Beautiful both haiku!

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  12. Sanjana April 12, 2012 at 8:59 PM

    bah! grt haiku:)

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  13. Maude LynnApril 12, 2012 at 9:23 PM

    Love that second one!

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  14. carol l mckennaApril 12, 2012 at 9:44 PM

    Great haiku Cynosure ~ Wow! ~ awesome photo ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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    1. CYNOSUREApril 13, 2012 at 1:20 AM

      Thanku so much Carol...
      Namaste...GOD bless ya... :)

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  15. ChèvrefeuilleApril 13, 2012 at 12:02 AM

    Great one!

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  16. AnonymousApril 13, 2012 at 5:54 AM

    Great set ... thank you for sharing. Day 12 ~~ Coherent?

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  17. magiceyeApril 13, 2012 at 6:16 AM

    indeed!!!

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  18. DeViL on WheeLs...April 14, 2012 at 12:08 AM

    Very nice one indeed :)

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  19. RajnishApril 14, 2012 at 11:58 AM

    beautiful pic...
    www.rajnishonline.blogspot.com

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