When the mind sways, And when the same feelings this heart portrays, And when pot is also not left with enough ink, so when the quill says, Words on the parchment feel like a cheap fabric that frays. So many lines fumbled, So many feelings got crumbled, Like someone feels when they get ghosted, Those letters, in the drawer, always remained unposted. PS: Most of my posts are late night musings. Either way, the letter posted or not, the things I write reach this online platform or not, it feels good to scribble down random words once in a while.
makes one ponder... profound thoughts, Sarab..
ReplyDeletenice set.. :)
thanks Jayanth... :)
DeleteA different depiction of hope... a gr8 one! :)
ReplyDeleteThanku so much Pranita... :D :D
DeleteMy fingers are crossed..May I find an answer..:) Well done ..
ReplyDeleteThanku sir...good luck for the answer... ;):P
Deletei always cross my fingers when i wish something :)nice 1 :)
ReplyDeletehaha...lol...
Deletethanks dear... :)
Fingers crossed is known everywhere - many different answers I think. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteThanku Ellecee... :D :D
Deletecontemplative haiku ~ all in the 'eyes of the beholder' ~ lovely ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^
ReplyDeleterightly said...thanks Carol... :)
DeleteI can only hope for the lucky omen ~
ReplyDeleteThant should be the only thing one must be hoping for... :)
Deleteso apt... Keeping fingers crossed are indeed an lucky omen for hope..loved it. Very profiund
ReplyDeleteThats what I doubt on... :P
Deletethanks Kajal... :)
Nicely written!!
ReplyDeletethanks Rama... :)
DeleteNicely written!!
ReplyDeleteWell mused - I'll go with superstition, it's bad luck not to. Here's hoping!
ReplyDeleteexactly man...don't stop hoping...coz hope dies...everything dies... ;)
DeleteGreat one. Very deep and meaningful. Thank you for sharing this with us and being part of this challenge.
ReplyDeleteNamaste
Thanks KP...you're most welcome...I'm loving it... :)
Deletenice one.... but i haiku has to be in 3 lines right!!.. if i am not wrong!!!
ReplyDeletethanks Sahi...
Deleteyou're right...haiku are of 3 lines and in my post i've written 3 haiku... :)
beautifully written...fingers crossed, a lucky omen or just a superstition ?
ReplyDeleteNice lines..keep writing
Bless ya!!
Thank you so much Harshita...GOD bless u too... :)
DeleteThis is beautiful!....we are all superstitious at times!
ReplyDelete100% agreed... :)
Delete:) anxious about superstition?
ReplyDeletehaha...really...??? :P
Deleteomen, anxiety or superstition, if it serves a purpose it's all for good. Like the transition and appreciate the attempt to deviate.
ReplyDeleteYeaaahhh...at last only thing that matters is the result...thanks LEO PAW... :)
DeleteSuch an inspirational Haiku..:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Mohinee... :)
DeleteWow!
ReplyDeleteApplause for your haiku :)
So sweet of you Simran...thanks dear... :)
Deletevery nice!
ReplyDeletethanks... :)
DeleteThe only thing I'm sure of is: Superstition is not hope!
ReplyDeleteTell Me, Sister Crow
agreed... :)
DeleteAnxiousness I think, less of superstition, Cynosure! Anxiosness in anticipation! Great verse!
ReplyDeleteHank
you got it right... ;)
Deletethanks... :)
Beautiful Haiku :)
ReplyDeleteThanku Neha... :)
Deletewow!!! wat a haiku:)
ReplyDeletethanku so much Geeta... :)
Deletefingers crossed.. have to decide..
ReplyDeleteabsolutely... :)
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