When the mind sways, And when the same feelings this heart portrays, And when pot is also not left with enough ink, so when the quill says, Words on the parchment feel like a cheap fabric that frays. So many lines fumbled, So many feelings got crumbled, Like someone feels when they get ghosted, Those letters, in the drawer, always remained unposted. PS: Most of my posts are late night musings. Either way, the letter posted or not, the things I write reach this online platform or not, it feels good to scribble down random words once in a while.
true.. good one... we end at the beginning. we begin at the end..
ReplyDeletenice one Sarab!!:)
thanks Jayanth... :)
Deleteits not the end, its the beginning of a new life ...nice :)
ReplyDeleterightly said Surbhi...thanks... :)
DeleteThis is beautifull..I would have loved to see it without picture.. excellent haiku and thought..
ReplyDeletelol...thanks a lot RS... :)
DeleteI have responded.. my haiku is 2-5-2..done deliberately..I wanted say maximum in minimum words after writing chains of haiku for months now.. it is OK as long as it is less than 17 syllables.. and it shows..thanks any way for being elert.. you pointed right based on what you understand of haiku..thanks..
ReplyDeleteroger that sir... :) \m/
DeleteThe cycle of life beautifully described!
ReplyDeletethanku so much Gemma... :)
Deletesensual and true to life ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^
ReplyDeletethanku Carol... :)
DeleteBeautiful, provocative haiku. Thank you
ReplyDeletethanks Ellecee...you're welcome... :)
DeleteAn excellent take at the prompt! Eternal truth... :)
ReplyDeletethanku so much Pranita... :)
DeleteThat's a beautiful thought !
ReplyDeletethanks a lot Abhinav... :)
DeleteAwesome Haiku :) :D.
ReplyDeleteMan you are an expert :D :).
Hats off :).
Ps. I have a small award for you :D :). http://sweetsomethingz.blogspot.in/2012/04/awesomeness-personified.html
thanku so much Poo...but still I've not forgotten that who put me into this...thanks a lot Poo... :)
Deletethanks for the award...I'll catch you for it at your page... :)
Nice take on cycle of life ~
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thanks Grace... :)
DeleteSuperb. Keep it up.
ReplyDeletethanks a lot ES... :)
DeleteAnd such is the cycle of life.
ReplyDeleteindeed... :)
DeleteThoughtful one!....Beautifully penned :)
ReplyDeletethanku so much Valli... :)
Deletethe cycle of birth and death... nice haiku man...
ReplyDeleteThanku so much Tarun... :)
Deletebeautifully done:)
ReplyDeletemy take: http://njn-sorceress.blogspot.in/
thanks IS... :)
Deletenice... though the phrase 'get laid' invokes mixed reactions :)
ReplyDeleteyeaahhh...in a way actually it does... :)
Deleteyour are super incredible with haikus:)
ReplyDeletethanku so much Elli... :)
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